Deception

By Gray Vision

Do you see that bird,
Flying through the air?
Do you see that bird,
Flying without a care?
Do you see that bird,
Wait,
There's something else there.
Did you see that bird,
Being snatched up by the rear?
That's life for you,
No one ever said
That It was fair.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty.
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  • drasticdaydreams On Thursday, March 31, 2016, drasticdaydreams (63)By person wrote:

    Hehe I like this. Noone's truly free. What a beautiful irony. Thanks for the giggles

  • A former member wrote: That's a reflective write. I like the way you've written it. Enjoyable. __cheers__ ~~ :)

  • Devilish On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Sooo true soooo true... I don't think you need any advice, your pretty talented... Oh and I said one body cause that's all we got is one... I love your work!!! Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    Yes Dev, all we have is one body, so take good care of it. It's hard trying to find time to actually write now since I'm so busy, but I'll still try my best to do what I can, so readers like yourself can be content here. Thank you for dropping by =)

  • crius42 On Sunday, June 27, 2010, crius42 (7)By person wrote:

    thank you for visiting me..I would have never of found you..I like your style. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    Thank you, that means alot and I'm looking forward to reading more of your works here soon. Thanks again =)

  • Riven Waker On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    a quick jolt of hard wisdom - artful and severe - well done

  • Gray Vision On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    RW you know of this cycle all to well, thank you for commenting =)

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