Deception

By Gray Vision

Do you see that bird,
Flying through the air?
Do you see that bird,
Flying without a care?
Do you see that bird,
Wait,
There's something else there.
Did you see that bird,
Being snatched up by the rear?
That's life for you,
No one ever said
That It was fair.

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Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty.

Comments on "Deception"

On Thursday, March 31, 2016, drasticdaydreams (55) wrote:

Hehe I like this. Noone's truly free. What a beautiful irony. Thanks for the giggles
A former member wrote: That's a reflective write. I like the way you've written it. Enjoyable. __cheers__ ~~ :)
On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Sooo true soooo true... I don't think you need any advice, your pretty talented... Oh and I said one body cause that's all we got is one... I love your work!!!
On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

Yes Dev, all we have is one body, so take good care of it. It's hard trying to find time to actually write now since I'm so busy, but I'll still try my best to do what I can, so readers like yourself can be content here. Thank you for dropping by =)
On Sunday, June 27, 2010, crius42 (7) wrote:

thank you for visiting me..I would have never of found you..I like your style. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

Thank you, that means alot and I'm looking forward to reading more of your works here soon. Thanks again =)
On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Riven Waker (317) wrote:

a quick jolt of hard wisdom - artful and severe - well done
On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

RW you know of this cycle all to well, thank you for commenting =)