The Hold

By Gray Vision

Feel me,
Use me,
Dream me,
Breathe me,
Love me or hate me
No matter what,
You'll always come running back to me.
I'm that addiction,
That frustration,
That anticipation,
That vexation.
Try running and you'll see,
The hold will bring you back to me.
I'll eat you up, spit you out
Fill you up, break you down,
I'm the boss of you, not you to me,
I'm the heart to you; you're the blood to me.
As long as I'm with you, you'll never be free,
Don't you see, we were meant to be?
I'm bound to you and you to me
Until its time to dispose of you,
And leave you be.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

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  • Dei On Monday, November 12, 2012, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    perfectly captured this. I know someone much like this. How refreshing a read.

  • Devilish On Monday, August 15, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I wana... Me me me me me... I love it... I'm right here... pick me! You hear me callin, Grey? Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Monday, August 15, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Oh yes Dev heh, be careful what you ask for it just might come true lol, I thought you'd like it and you're very welcome, I hear you calling so I'll drop by =)

  • Miztaken4beauty On Thursday, August 26, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    This piece was truly biting. A wake up call.

  • Gray Vision On Wednesday, September 1, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Is this a reality for you? I definately hope not but if so I wish you the best of luck in breaking the habit cause you're worth more than any bottle, substance etc. Thank you for commenting and take care =)

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    excellent expression, powerful, your absolutely right on this, it will dispose of you and leave you cold n in the street. unfortunately its always too late when people finally wake up... glad your a shining light in that darkness friend!

  • Gray Vision On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    I'm trying to shed some light on this issue so that others can take something from it before it's indeed to late, thanks for commenting my friend, you be good now, take care =)

  • A former member wrote: wow! so deep and so real. great write keep writing

  • Gray Vision On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    I wrote this piece on drugs because I hear people say all the time that, "the drug doesn't own them" or "they are in control" you know "I can stop when I want" or "Just one more shot or puff." The truth is that the drug is actually using them, the drug is in control. The drug isn't craving to be used but the person is craving the drug. The drug can wait but the person can't so who's controlling who? See what I'm saying by "Until its time to dispose of you, and leave you be."

  • A former member wrote: Wow. Excellent take on addiction. "I'm the heart to you, you're the blood to me" That can be applied to love, drugs, bad habits, etc. I enjoyed this one.

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