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twenty.nine candles
By denver nitze
twenty.nine candles
sit on top of a cake
this can't be happening
it must be a mistake
twenty.nine years
and countless tears
stacked on a cake
to make it
a
bit
sweet...er?
and twenty.nine
heart.aches
and
twenty.nine
loves
all lost in a moment
all gone in a breathe
as they...
dwindle.
dance.
gasp.
shudder.
and
.die.
and in the
dark.ness
life
has
gone
.
.
.
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© 2008 denver nitze
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A former member wrote:
be; just be.............>
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A former member wrote:
Don't you dare, i'm handing you a pocket full of candles....now make a wish, keep well ta~
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2008, denver nitze
(256)
wrote:
believe me i'm tryin. i don't want to be blown out either. :) thanks for being so fuckin awesome. ~ta~
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A former member wrote:
luckily for the world... beauty has been deepened, brightened, increased and given life, the word itself has found new bounds, all because of these 29 years... and this world will be so much less *lights a candle* you share this day (tenth?) with my nephew... and now I know happysad... thanks for being you *sends all the strength of love*
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On Tuesday, July 8, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
yes the tenth is my day. thank you for your sweet comment. :) ~ta~
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