addicted to the internet

By denver nitze

yep.

its true
i can't walk by a computer
with
out
loggin on



i have a problem


a serious problem



i think its addiction
its such an affliction


i'm a junkie to the


.net.










writers note: the last four lines of this are written to the melody of the NVS song "positive thinking" thank you NVS for being such an inspiration to me and my life.

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© 2008 denver nitze
Published on Tuesday, June 17, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • meadowlea On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, meadowlea (19)By person wrote:

    the upside is at least we hear from you and you check us out

  • Taunting The Reaper On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, Taunting The Reaper (178)By person wrote:

    Unplugging for a while is good for you but there's nothing wrong with coming back. If I spend too much time away from my computer it's like missing a goode friend so I can relate.

  • Withering petals On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, Withering petals (68)By person wrote:

    it's our connection to the (our) world (that we've created). How could we not be addicted?

  • Dark Wing On Tuesday, June 17, 2008, Dark Wing (51)By person wrote:

    there is so many cool things, why log off? well besides the back pain, eyes hurting ~Crow

  • A former member wrote: on for hours and hours. my back hurts im in this chair so long. lol

  • A former member wrote: so totally...true..:D


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