navigating the coastlines of love
By Taunting The Reaper
a dynasty of madmen
kneel at your feet
with the most amorous of intentions
as if they were maltese falcons
ascending to great wealth, glorious!
the beaming smiles of dying men
their vision so clear
their eyes sparkling brilliantly
streaking twilight
drinking in your silhouette
mouths open
hearts open
your entrancing name
tracing the bulbous lips of phantom lovers
who, much to their credit
saw you sprinkling hope
like fairy dust
into cool summer breezes
promising to smile
on the fortunes
of wretched souls
their days fleeting
their dreams reaching
as they dance on silver-lined clouds
waiting for the warm blood
in their sighs to coo you into believing,
as unlikely as it may seem,
that even broken men can dream
invoking your smile
into lighthouses
to navigate the coastlines of love
Comments on "navigating the coastlines of love"
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A former member wrote:
Loved it, read it over 10 times, count on me reading more of these pieces
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
To put love in such a wanted way .. Very real..the images you showed,.all followed a dark scenery with needy men and the small hope..you put an amorous feeling to heavenly imagery.. .the coo and the waiting for that perfect end... I fell in love wi the imagery in here.. I'd bookmark if any room ...eventually
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On Friday, April 4, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
this was a very soothing piece. it left me feeling a calm warmth while i pictured beings smiling, arms open...as there souls were to soak in any happiness and peace around. i loved it. lovely
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On Friday, March 28, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
In the old days; still today, really, sailors were very superstitious men, and they had numerous little rituals they'd do to help ensure them a safe journey, and a swift return. This felt like something close to that, in a more emotive context. Why am I rambling? Nice work. Best I've read all day :D
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On Friday, March 28, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
btw, I'd bookmark this if I had the room, or the heart to MAKE room for it. :D
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On Thursday, March 27, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
love the language and feel of this... created a lovely word brushed images and emotions that gave me chills... as if it teeters on a blade between devotion and accusation... well done as always
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On Friday, March 28, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
agrees. this is beautiful on so many levels. mouth candy. *cheers* ~ta~