..you'll never get it..

By denver nitze

no one seems to notice my secrets
only read them quick and split
onward looking further
normal..byproducts of
experimental
nearing
ornamental..
tisk..tisk..english teacher shakes it
if only..you took the time to see
creativity..is me
everywhere and everything
screaming in whispers..to the
moments..
yesterday..
so why don't you take the time?
ever so slightly step back..
creep..into the shadows..of the
room..beyond you..
everything you hold sacred
take my hand and let
me guide you
every eye should understand
supple
suggestions
alure you to my words
glaring thru darkness
eternally
saved..
.
.
her writings were much more than
ever they thought..though it was
really just an antidote to cure
exceptionally..boring..days
.
.

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© 2008 denver nitze
Published on Friday, March 14, 2008.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"
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  • Sketso On Friday, March 14, 2008, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    ...just an antidote... *ahem* UNDERSTATEMENT! I enjoyed this one!

  • Niemand On Friday, March 14, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Heheh, much fun.

  • denver nitze On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    *giggles* i know you are but what am i? :P luvs 4 u ~ta

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Friday, March 14, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    haha this was great. Fun to read and very well said. *salutes*

  • denver nitze On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    thank you. it means alot coming from you. ~ta

  • slow.burn.star On Friday, March 14, 2008, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    xxxxxxx

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, March 14, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I do notice them. I realy do

  • denver nitze On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    i know you do sweetheart. this isn't aimed at anyone just another of my dumb poems. ~ta

  • elisa On Friday, March 14, 2008, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    my favorite time to be brilliant ... when nobody is looking. love this. :)

  • denver nitze On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    why thank you darling. *bows and kisses elisa's hand* ~ta


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