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..you'll never get it..
By denver nitze
no one seems to notice my secrets
only read them quick and split
onward looking further
normal..byproducts of
experimental
nearing
ornamental..
tisk..tisk..english teacher shakes it
if only..you took the time to see
creativity..is me
everywhere and everything
screaming in whispers..to the
moments..
yesterday..
so why don't you take the time?
ever so slightly step back..
creep..into the shadows..of the
room..beyond you..
everything you hold sacred
take my hand and let
me guide you
every eye should understand
supple
suggestions
alure you to my words
glaring thru darkness
eternally
saved..
.
.
her writings were much more than
ever they thought..though it was
really just an antidote to cure
exceptionally..boring..days
.
.
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© 2008 denver nitze
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, Sketso
(435)
wrote:
...just an antidote... *ahem* UNDERSTATEMENT! I enjoyed this one!
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Heheh, much fun.
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
*giggles* i know you are but what am i? :P luvs 4 u ~ta
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
haha this was great. Fun to read and very well said. *salutes*
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
thank you. it means alot coming from you. ~ta
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
xxxxxxx
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I do notice them. I realy do
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
i know you do sweetheart. this isn't aimed at anyone just another of my dumb poems. ~ta
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
my favorite time to be brilliant ... when nobody is looking. love this. :)
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On Friday, March 14, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
why thank you darling. *bows and kisses elisa's hand* ~ta
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