comfort in chaos

By denver nitze

...
calm.
silent.
peace.
silent.
serenity.
!!!wrecks my brain to pieces!!!
i need the world to spin too fast off kilter
to electrify and sin and cast
a comfort found within
the chaotic world
i live
in
.
















dedicated to gina thank you for the idea.

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© 2008 denver nitze
Published on Sunday, March 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Sketso On Monday, March 10, 2008, Sketso (435)By person wrote:

    Imagery in a written format, I'm lovin' that fact alone!

  • GraveFlower On Sunday, March 9, 2008, GraveFlower (249)By person wrote:

    i love when you say my name mm,,,,,,,so much emotion,,your like woah

  • freudian-slip On Sunday, March 9, 2008, freudian-slip (239)By person wrote:

    holy shit, it looks like a spinning top. (how'd u do dat?) love it love it love it

  • denver nitze On Saturday, March 29, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    i just realized you saw this. :) so glad now. i thought you missed it. thanks for the idea. :) ~ta~

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, March 9, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Looks like something you'd spin.

  • Niemand On Sunday, March 9, 2008, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    *snuggles into chaos*

  • A former member wrote: *snuggles into her snuggling into chaos...closes eyes and sleeps peacefully*

  • A former member wrote: lovely. ~ hdb.


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