skylite

By denver nitze

i feel my castle crumbling
and as i sit here
in the sand
letting the carefully sculpted pieces
...fall...
on my broken hands
i wonder silently
in sin
is this is my .doom!?
my fate
my curse
the end
is every castle i build
??doomed to fall??
is it the end
... or a ...
beginning
or pipe dreams
of a sort
in my tower
in this castle
falling down i do
!resort?
picking up the pieces
trying to fill the cracks
with every repair made
my tower fights it back
the ceiling is a skylite
the rain comes pouring through
i feel our castle falling
i'm inside
i'm falling too.

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Published on Friday, March 7, 2008. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Comments on "skylite"

On Friday, March 7, 2008, GraveFlower (240) wrote:

im sorry,,,,,,,thats how i feel today..you described it perfectly,,beautiful write, as always.....
On Friday, March 7, 2008, denver nitze (251) wrote:

unfortunately this is how i feel everyday. fortunately for me i get cheered up by comments from pretty girls like you. thank you sweets, hope you feel better today as well, let me know if there's anything i can do to cheer you up. :) ~ta
On Friday, March 7, 2008, Moonflower (298) wrote:

felt like a sad dream. i liked this
On Friday, March 7, 2008, thelostmessenger (110) wrote:

great imagery. nice write. loved the last couple lines, it seemed to speed up as i read them. *messenger
On Friday, March 7, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Good image you paint here.
On Friday, March 7, 2008, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

Never forget, dear friend, there are those who will be there to catch you,endings are only the quiet pause a second before your next breath, and new beginings. I hope what begins for you stays as good as it may be when it starts. Good luck my friend. Fear nothing. especially the newly risen Sun Uncle Bloth
On Friday, March 7, 2008, Niemand (355) wrote:

*trips and falls*