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Shadowed by Words
By RubyXero
Once I spoke through words
meshing and combining
a path of rhythm
and imagery with which
to place my feet upon
on a darkly, rich
path through life.
But somehow...
lost in the art of tragedy
and thrown on this brink
of instability
I find that these lips
won't part.
They wish not to utter
a heed of warning
nor a shout
of protest.
Not even a sound.
We sit like strangers.
My tongue and my mind.
For I shall wander
up top for now.
Expanding this plane
and venturing
into such a fascinating
state of being.
For by his name I plea...
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© 2008 RubyXero
Published on Friday, March 7, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Shadowed by Words"
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A former member wrote:
very deep
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2008, MESUN
(230)
wrote:
Very Poe-ish. at least to me anyway. Something bout that whole "i don't understand what i'm reading but as a whole it somehow makes sense" sorta thing. weird, i always like that sorta thing even though it drives me nuts. nice job.
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On Monday, March 10, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
threading words like tiny needles, the little bastards won't hold still if your hands shake. i think you still managed to pull it off.
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On Friday, March 7, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
Yes this is quite the mouth-candy. It's very fluid. " We sit like strangers, my toungue and my mind." - that line is amazing. We wander this earth, and those who wish to seek the answers wish for too much... I think...
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On Friday, March 7, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
'to place my feet upon on a darkly, rich path through life.' this created a comfortable vision for me, much like the dark trails i travel myself. this was intriguing and felt great on my tongue. mouth candy. i actually spoke it twice just to have the pleasure again. *cheers* very well put and placed. ~ta
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