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a view from the rear
By Taunting The Reaper
full
round
naked from the rear
long , curly
brazen red hair
the small of her back
blossoming
into soft pale cheeks
of jiggling delight
she danced
I danced
we danced
all night
and in the morning
she walked
I walked
we walked
away
.
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© 2008 William Bermudez
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On Saturday, January 15, 2011, ColorMeToxic
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wrote:
I really liked this. :)
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
Love the way it was carried out and how your writing unfolds through pictures one after another till you get to the perfect close.
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On Monday, June 16, 2008, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
I loved this. Especially the part at the end, where you both walk away. Powerful.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
awww. nice. we like those nights. but sometimes after we leave we think...damn i should've gotten a number. :) nice piece.
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, Niemand
(361) wrote:
*sighs* And here I was expecting a picture...
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(178) wrote:
LOL! Funny stuff Geisha. Sorry to have let you down.
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