drops.

By Six-Out




and watching her speak
is like reaching for stars.
-and if you ever get there. the burn.
will get ya.

and it's time to make a wish.
because the sky is screaming your name.
tonight. this is yours

so write me letters on your tattered dreams.
and I'll catch every tear you cry.



oh yes. tonight.

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© 2007 Jon Rodgers
Published on Sunday, November 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Blood Saga On Monday, December 7, 2009, Blood Saga (78)By person wrote:

    This sent a shudder through my very soul. . .thank you, so very very much, my friend.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Love this one, beautiful piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Kinkypoptart On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    wow... this is so sweet. is it for anyone in particular? hmmm!?!? -Kinks

  • A former member wrote: it's all girls that comment here. ought to tell you something. :P

  • Six-Out On Monday, November 26, 2007, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    are you calling me gay?

  • blue On Monday, November 26, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    hahaha

  • A former member wrote: Oh the devotion is overwhelming. Beautiful as usual. ....-Samone

  • swing_the_hammer On Monday, November 26, 2007, swing_the_hammer (48)By person wrote:

    glad to see you posting! i don't know how you ever doubt your work... beautiful and gut-wrenching as usual.

  • A former member wrote: so succinct and yet it says so much more than mere words. ... so quiet, nearly reverent and.... yes. ness

  • Mahakala On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    *sigh* wow... you know what would be absolutely wonderful... if you could record yourself reading it & being able to post it along with the poem...

  • Aunty Depressant On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    oh yes, oh yes

  • Lynaes On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    "so write me letters on your tattered dreams." thank you for deciding to post this. If you get to close to something so amazing, it's bound to have some affect.. brilliant.


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