Phantasm
By cre
A blowing wind of second thoughts
Like silky wisps of cotton candy fading
Or mercury with no simmering day to discuss
Slipping my grip like dappled sunday shading
Vagaries considered peripherally
Ghosts dripping stones in thoughts evasive
Heating an ancient tribal soup
In a swirling vat of knowledge invasive
Shuddering on frozen breezes
Like freezer-burn frost sucked into lungs
And clinging to lips that kiss hot panic
Enveloping the terror of insanity's tongue
Slip rippling the fingers of not-quite-thoughts
Through the half-braided hair of mind over matter
Seasons and days on another lost calendar
A pattern of months irreparably shattered
Fragmented figments
In a finger-paint stream of dreams and delusions
Where all that is certain is a certain lack
Of anything nearing a foregone conclusion
While thoughts like gusting winds
That scatter leaves and somehow still the air
Tease my mind with a complete lack of mercy
And then suggest they were never really there.
Comments on "Phantasm"
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On Saturday, October 23, 2004, EviscerationX
(7) wrote:
Reading this was better than sex...possibly the most mouth-watering read I've had the fortune of laying my eyes upon...simply amazing.
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A former member wrote:
Truly Amazing Work Cre
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On Sunday, June 1, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Oh this is a fun one!...to think and say! Makes me giddy all over;)~DW~
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A former member wrote:
I'm so jealous of your talent!! Grrrrrrr!!! haha, this is awesome, like every other!! GO you! You rock my world!
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On Sunday, April 27, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
A beautiful visual bombardment. Stunnin'.
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Jane, I am going to kill you. Why must you be so damn good? Why?!?!?!
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A former member wrote:
*claps and wistles loudly* Good write cre! (oh and btw love the new graphic)
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
so different, so many great lines. An effortless visual song.
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A former member wrote:
I really relate to this type of feel...I always get it towards the end of sunday, just when the week is about to start all over again..
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A former member wrote:
You are so amazing... there are no words to explain the way you make me feel after reading your poems!! Another amazing write!!*Chelsie*
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On Friday, April 25, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
like days that wont release the rain, sun hidden behind a shroud, so much more than a cloud, sittin dangling legs over a tree branch thinking things have got to be other than this.
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A former member wrote:
your poems are so beautiful. but they get me wishing i had a better education =P lol great job jane, definately an amazing writer