Angels Three

By cre

O' Child, when he would come for thee
Thine angels they would cry
In angst, I guess, and nothing less
Three screams would rend the night

Although at first it seems absurd
To see a child so wee
Surrounded thus, we must discuss
The way they came to be

'Twas just one night with little light
While winds did smash around
Such sorrow on that eve and morrow
Soul's own death toll did sound

Her mighty heart did rip apart
And anguished Sky did tear
Despair in pain did shriek his name
At thy softly whispered prayer

Though pain and death do steal my breath
Let me not be wrought asunder
Oh Angels weep o'er slaughtered sheep
And break the spell they're under

And darkened Night did hide thy plight
Not from celestial eyes
Upon thy plea they answered thee
And gathered surely nigh

Courage gifted, thy spirits lifted
Though pain did still stalk thee
Forever hence at thy defense
Angelic warriors, three

Though sadly he, still came for thee
Thine angels kept thee sane
'Till pain and death that stole thy breath
Had finally passed away.

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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Sunday, March 16, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Circe Avalon On Monday, February 4, 2008, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    So very good, prithee, what inspired thee to write so?

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    you are such an amazing writer, and so inspirational too. Awesome write ~*~Tart~*~

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    ok so i just looked and i've already left a comment from the past. but meh, again it just proves how much i love this poem. LOL ~gothic

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    all i have to say is that i am left in shock. Shock because i have not read this before, shocked because of its exquisite beauty, shocked because i am shocked. As i'm sure your well a where, i have a "thing" for Angels and this is THE best angel poem i th

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    think i have ever read from DP. Cre you have completely out done yourself at this one. I have always loved your work but this particular poem has put a new prespictive of you, and your talent. Bravo, pat yourself on the back.... wow. ~gothic~

  • A former member wrote: Ahh...this was beautiful Cre. The old language...it just...you seemed to have mastered it. Is there anything you can't write?

  • The Fallen Angel On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    Very sweet write by a very sweet person! +Fallen Angel+

  • CharlottesWeb On Friday, July 4, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    The first time was silent, the second outloud, the third...in a whisper...the fourth in amazement...though I'm not sure why. Your soul shouts it's feeling and meaning with every word...every poem.

  • CharlottesWeb On Friday, July 4, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    I am for a first...lost for words. So poignant, so meant and so much more is this work...that I can't dissect my own feelings for it enough to tell you about them. Thankyou for sharing this one with us. ~DW~

  • A former member wrote: immaculate. :)

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. Deeply spiritual. Love it.

  • Ravenblade On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    DAMN!!!That was an awesome poem, I could see that one being put in Cre's best Poems, way down the road, its so much like a poem of the older styles, like Poe, or Crowlwy. I love the wording on it, and just everything.

  • Demosthenes On Thursday, October 23, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    see that first word in that comment right above this comment? thats my comment. and it is very. -B

  • diavolessa On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    just great Jane! This is one more great piece! keep writing! :)

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    magnificent. I would have had a very difficult time writing in this style... you did it so beautifully....so effortlessly. :)

  • Jonas On Tuesday, March 18, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i read this, first, like beat poetry; i let the words just roll off of my tongue and ignored the meaning... it was beautiful... i read again and it became moreso... i like the changes in your styles.

  • Six-Out On Sunday, March 16, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Damn you, always trying to upstage me! I admit it was good, but that doesn't change the fact that you're a loser. :[ BATS!!!

  • maddin foxxxy On Sunday, March 16, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    great read...just screams ur talent away!

  • A former member wrote: wow this is very good, i enjoy it more more :)


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