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the one thing
By flying_fox
there's much sucking and fucking
thrusting screaming demeaning
begging pleading and dreaming
for what I don't know
bound in leather together
dripping wax painted feather
keep this going forever
or I'm gonna explode
get me going speed me up
tie me down tie me up
from my juices you sup
and continue to blow
there's much scratching and lashing
welting melting flesh trashing
all your words are rehashing
don't know why they don't go
let me up as you leave me
do not try to deceive me
for your mind does not seize me
this is one thing I know
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Copyright 2004 flying_fox
Published on Friday, January 23, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(222)
wrote:
Fucking brilliant :) It naturally flows fast and really holds you in it. And the ending was superb.
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A former member wrote:
oo..heh i call those "snacks" ;D nice i liked this how unashamed the expression. :)
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A former member wrote:
hm. maybe i just wildly missed the point, because i'm not going to use words like lovely or passionate... but this spoke to me of the loneliness and emptiness of people with whom you're still alone, no matter how fiercely close you press
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On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Wow, I loved the rhyming in this. -Morb
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On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
o0o0o0.. wow this is passionate and lovely again.. This could be a song with those beautiful words.. ~Kirsten~
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
I agree, I just naturally read this at a fast pace. Refreshing to read poems like this on here, a step away from the usual.
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, nightshade
(120) wrote:
ok they first to line got me reading and once i started couldn't stop how bout dropping some wax on me i need to get rid of the hair on my legs lol great write
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
smooth,very smooth.i thought i was reading penthouse letters there for a moment.nicely done,especially the end. *thumbs up*
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A former member wrote:
that was amazing. i love the words you choose and how they work together so well. i really love your poetry. so thanks for posting it.
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A former member wrote:
'bound in leather together
dripping wax painted feather' an orgy of words; as your sis says, but i wouldn't know either...stiil, the words play well in this fictionstitched bed together...
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A former member wrote:
however in excess they be...'this is one thing I know...'
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
I don't know where you learnt this sort of thing, young lady. >:) hehheh. purr
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On Saturday, January 24, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
must run in the family is all I can say! FF xxx
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On Friday, January 23, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
nice "tip - toe" around the subject - enjoy your work very much - funguy
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