...Hues

By SolApathy

 
Hazel hues across this sky of green and blues
Whilst brown will play
Yellow wisps of sun slip into the fray
Starlit dreams as all these colors define
A soul so colorful and refined
Reflections deep as your stunning eyes explore
A world where there could be so much—More
I wish if only to have the chance to dance
Within the melody of this hazel romance
Take me for a twirl as I contemplate within your reflection
The stunning beauty of your souls’ perfection

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Published on Thursday, October 5, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...Unto the chasm of a universe cold, We find warmth in the eyes of a lone soul...
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  • Anna McCarra On Saturday, April 7, 2018, Anna McCarra (408)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful. It makes me feel like what I imagine I'm supposed to feel when people sign their name 'Love and Light'. Like a magical light beam hit me Scholar

  • Drea On Sunday, February 4, 2018, Drea (1520)By person wrote:

    Congrats on PotD :)

  • A former member wrote: I imagine that you have melted plenty of hearts with your words alone. Le sigh, dearest. Rebs:).

  • Cassette On Wednesday, January 3, 2018, Cassette (1244)By person wrote:

    beautiful

  • AmethystAsh On Sunday, November 12, 2017, AmethystAsh (50)By person wrote:

    You manage to captivate with such a simple yet exquisite write ~Ash

  • A former member wrote: simple, peaceful, poignant,,, kudos

  • A former member wrote: This piece is so simple and unfiltered it gives me chills. Great piece!

  • worm On Friday, October 6, 2017, worm (1316)By person wrote:

    maybe I'll just sit here and let the colors of fall wash over my soul... a well written and soothing piece! ~worm~

  • worm On Friday, October 6, 2017, worm (1316)By person wrote:

    or maybe I'll go to my girlfriend's and lose myself in her eyes...

  • Mute Serenade On Friday, October 6, 2017, Mute Serenade (471)By person wrote:

    What beautiful sweetness. A lovely ode and a magical write. One of my favorites from you fo sho.

  • dwells On Thursday, October 5, 2017, dwells (5706)By person wrote:

    Hi Sol and good to see DP back in business. This autumn poem speaks splendidly of the common brown that goes unremarked on too many occasions. Guessing a typo maybe in L7? Windows to the soul indeed. Cheers my friend! - Dan

  • SolApathy On Thursday, October 5, 2017, SolApathy (516)By person wrote:

    Good catch :)

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, October 5, 2017, carlosjackal (2468)By person wrote:

    This is both classic and classical...A superb ode to Autumn and to true love herself...And that author's note is a stand alone poem..

  • Bornfrompain On Thursday, October 5, 2017, Bornfrompain (835)By person wrote:

    This was superb perfection!!! - BFP


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