sayll

By gumshoe






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|~       
the         
seas                
music                       
on a night  |                           
such as this  |                               
annihilates the                                   
infinite within me                                
the world around me                         
and i let myself go forth_                 
|        
under the skin of the night wrapped in silence      
a tender and unmoving slumber where
     death welcomes me ashore

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Copyright 2013 gumshoe
Published on Friday, March 15, 2013.     Filed under:
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  • Cassette On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette (1244)By person wrote:

    This..... holy wow. the stars, the sailboat... the imagery inside the image; a concrete poem that I could never hope to live up to.

  • Mute Serenade On Sunday, September 3, 2017, Mute Serenade (471)By person wrote:

    This is so stunning! I love it so.... Beauty in the words and formations.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, September 3, 2017, carlosjackal (2468)By person wrote:

    Dammit straight, sister from another mister!

  • Anna McCarra On Saturday, January 28, 2017, Anna McCarra (408)By person wrote:

    Amazing, both visually and poetically. Scholar

  • blue On Tuesday, March 1, 2016, blue (1457)By person wrote:

    Some poems are just so immediate, penetratingly powerful, that they eclipse distances and enter deep into the blood, where we have no choice but to make them our own. Pure poetic magick at play here. ~b

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Saturday, April 18, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium (404)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful, I love it!:)

  • A former member wrote: This poem just ranked you up to a higher class of poets in my book. This is a skilled visual.

  • Hands_Around_My_Throat On Thursday, November 28, 2013, Hands_Around_My_Throat (79)By person wrote:

    I love the imagery coupled with the wording. Beautifully done!

  • blue On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, blue (1457)By person wrote:

    Had to come back to this.... as I am sure I will again. ~b

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, October 12, 2013, carlosjackal (2468)By person wrote:

    Simply stunning..A wonderful work of art, to both read and to gaze at.

  • A former member wrote: Under the skin of the night wrapped in silence, that's an awesome line and my favorite line.

  • blue On Saturday, October 12, 2013, blue (1457)By person wrote:

    This is truly deserving of 'Poem of the Day' ....and then some... and the some... ~b

  • blue angel On Sunday, July 28, 2013, blue angel (1134)By person wrote:

    Love this and your significance of writes:)~ Bows to you****

  • Despair On Friday, July 19, 2013, Despair (48)By person wrote:

    I have come to the conclusion that you are a genius.

  • Shangri-La On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Shangri-La (114)By person wrote:

    This is one of the most beautiful examples of concrete poetry that I've ever seen. Wow! High kudos!

  • King_Crazy_Dave On Sunday, May 12, 2013, King_Crazy_Dave (54)By person wrote:

    wordboat is calm, I was about to get all picky about shapes and poems and then i sighed. but the sigh was happy. wordboat is calm.

  • FranklyMrShankly On Saturday, May 11, 2013, FranklyMrShankly (17)By person wrote:

    Beautiful.

  • Alchemist On Thursday, April 18, 2013, Alchemist (874)By person wrote:

    Always fun and with words like the wind in the saylls.

  • Corinthian On Sunday, March 17, 2013, Corinthian (360)By person wrote:

    Aw this is so beautiful ....so creative .

  • FadedBlues On Friday, March 15, 2013, FadedBlues (2973)By person wrote:

    ...gentle breezes & peaceful waters. your words on linen sails...


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