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Comments by ShardsofSilence

"Powerful, yet spoken in a soft subtle way. How so many of us fall to that game....well written indeed. I enjoyed it."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "I know you, because I wrote you." by DiscordiaDarling

"I just keep coming back to this..."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "The Flight of the Broken Winged" by RhymeBound

"Dieing should be dying, but other than that it is good, me thinks...I mean, it fits the sonnet format and works.."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "My shakespearean sonnet." by SilentDreamer

"So beautifully written, yet utterly crushing. I absolutely love this. And it seemed to go perfectly with the song I'm currently listening to (Everything - Lifehouse)..."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Etched (when you left)" by jack paper

"Fucking brilliant :) It naturally flows fast and really holds you in it. And the ending was superb."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "the one thing" by flying_fox

"Hmm..short as it is, it is very well written, but I feel there could be more perhaps..."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "False Hope" by Armour

"That gave off a very raw emotion well captured in words.."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Cunt" by Disassembly Boy

"Oh, Dido is pronounced differently than ditto haha."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "The Victim" by HattoriHanzo

"Absolutely fantastic."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "sleepless" by jack paper

"Well said, well written :)"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Dear Princess" by DiscordiaDarling

"Hmmm I've yet to see them like that. I still despise them. And the boys that act the same way too."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Dear Princess" by DiscordiaDarling

"Heh, clever rhyme. Short, but well written. Good job."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "The Victim" by HattoriHanzo

"Concept well conveyed. It could flow a bit better in the first 2 stanzas, but you ended very strongly. I love that last stanza. Powerful. Concluded the piece well."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Broken" by HattoriHanzo

"Powerful. Very nicely written. You can feel it build up in the middle and just hit you with the last two lines. Brilliant and well done."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Hemorrhage (not a cutting poem)" by Disassembly Boy

"a wonderful write indeed with an absolute superb ending."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "a soundtrack to the home of forgotten dreams." by Six-Out

"Well written :) with brilliant imagery. I'm really loving the last two stanzas. An astounding tribute indeed"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "The Legion of Tragic Heroes Marches" by RhymeBound

"Great write :) I really like that second stanza for some reason it stands out to me greater than the rest, but all of it was good and good end to it too"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Chasing the White Rabbit" by Step_20

"oh my.."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "You’re On The Floor BEGGING To Be My Little Fucking Whore" by DeprivedOfReason

"damn. That's all I can say."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "when oblivion fucks a whisper (go back to sleep)" by whisperer

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