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The Victim
By HattoriHanzo
Eyes of Stone, Face of Glass
Disguised as a Doll in a Jason Mask
Hair in Knots, Wrists are Tied
There She Was, but Here She Lies
Dress Torn Back, Puddled Blood
Unless Her Nap is Nothing But
Cold as Ice, Stiff as Wood
Now Hold this Knife and Stick Her Good
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© 2007 HattoriHanzo
Published on Monday, February 12, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Victim"
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Mylissa
(825)
wrote:
intense...well done.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
Haha, i thought it was from the word 'ditto' but the singer spells it Dido. maybe she uses artistic license.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
Oh, Dido is pronounced differently than ditto haha.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
i like this too..good rhyme. well done!
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
thx just shoot me. but i dont know what "dittoing" means exactly... or at all
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Drea
(1388) wrote:
"dittoing" as in "ditto" or agreeing with.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
Thx 4 the feedback. This is the only old poem i'v posted but im glad it's been recieved well.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
Heh, clever rhyme. Short, but well written. Good job.
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A former member wrote:
Ha! I loved the ending. This was kick ass.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
i always find myself dittoing glass. welcome to DP my friend!
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