I know you, because I wrote you.
By DiscordiaDarling
I read you oh so well.
un-masking your every flaw,
critiquing words before you speak,
knowing all your dirty little thoughts.
Does that scare you?
Realizing that I am in your head.
Seeing as I knew your intentions,
and I still let you take advantage of me
We both know this game all too well.
Perfected the art of playing,
even when our hearts are on the line.
Lie to me baby.
Tell me I'm better than her.
It might seem shallow,
but it's what I need to hear.
Say you prefer in depth conversation,
as opposed to porn star tits.
This is a horrible trend,
but I'm making a fashion statement.
You're just plagiarism of my past.
What does it matter anyway?
We are both doomed to make the same mistakes over.
You're destined to cheat,
and I will fall inlove with you.
We only gravitate to things with the potential of being self-destructive.
That's just how the game goes sweetie.
The cards are printed with blood,
the dice are bone fragments.
You and I, are really one in the same.
Regardless, of if you admit it or not.
We wrote each other,
and I promise you.
You won't have a happy ending.
Awards
Comments on "I know you, because I wrote you."
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A former member wrote:
i agree, this is one that you could read over and over. I loved it.
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2010, charliebrown
(22) wrote:
very very good enjoyed reading more than once
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A former member wrote:
I soooo enjoyed this one. x
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2010, punk mc cool
(74) wrote:
amazing write dude.....cheating always sucks....>.
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A former member wrote:
...speechless...
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On Friday, March 2, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
Damn. This was a crushing blow to the illusory synergy that some create for themselves. Well done. ~b
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On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, DiscordiaDarling
(26) wrote:
Thank you, everyone. Would anyone mind telling me how to find the address to send a post card to D.P?
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
Powerful, yet spoken in a soft subtle way. How so many of us fall to that game....well written indeed. I enjoyed it.
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
your calm tone belies a profound sadness. thanks for sharing. this sounds very familiar. it almost made me cry.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
excellent piece. i cant believe i missed this. fabulous.. some great lines too.
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
The harsh truth to the intriguing game. How we know, and still keep falling. I too enjoyed the metaphors, and appreciate the sentiment of plagiarised pasts tainting that to come.
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
this is a super kick-ass write! "plagiarism of my past", cards printed with blood and bone fragments as dice....i luv those mediphores and your casual-sounding narrative that i strive for but you do beautifully. keep up the good wrk!
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A former member wrote:
holly shit this was fucking awsome keep on doing what you do!!!!!!!!!
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, DiscordiaDarling
(26) wrote:
Thank you glasscass, and everyone. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^.^
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A former member wrote:
Holy fucking shit this was amazing. Im a little lost for words over this. Damn
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
i'm in awe! bitter... i think i've played this game... write on GE
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A former member wrote:
Great write! Please continue to share this wonderful talent with us all.
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This is outstanding.
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On Saturday, February 24, 2007, DiscordiaDarling
(26) wrote:
Thank you hun :]
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A former member wrote:
this is potent stuff. I especially liked
the 5th stanza.Write on!