when oblivion fucks a whisper (go back to sleep)

By whisperer

Faint incendiary whispers burn in the beats of a kettle drum





i am the background of a dream to you


burning like the song you fuck in time to










go back to sleep











dance and sweat to the heart on a deathbed











go back to sleep












close your eyes, let it stop

i'll only be a thought

another fallen angel on the wings of a tear drop











go back to sleep











i won't be the one to protect you from those imaginary fears you were never running from

i'm not someone who can guide youu

i'm just another story standing right behind you








go back to sleep









churning in the space of a heart beat
i never wanna wake to this
i'll never be going back to sleep






i'm here







don't judge yourself by the company you keep









i'm here


for awhile until you forget this






my dear


fair well, i think i'll always regret this











go back to sleep

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© 2006 whisperer
Published on Wednesday, December 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Shikiryu On Friday, January 30, 2015, Shikiryu (70)By person wrote:

    i'm just another story standing right behind you- that line really shook me, great write

  • beautifulfallenangel On Thursday, February 22, 2007, beautifulfallenangel (63)By person wrote:

    i stll lobe lobe it, but even more now!!!! :)

  • The Zebra Warrior On Thursday, February 22, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (1521)By person wrote:

    I lobe it too :)

  • DeprivedOfReason On Thursday, December 14, 2006, DeprivedOfReason (30)By person wrote:

    Ahhh Yes... A perfect circle... Go back to sleep indeed. love the vidoe to this song... so political, so anti-bush-shit. Great inspiration for a piece too .. obviously

  • beautifulfallenangel On Thursday, December 14, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (63)By person wrote:

    (kisses her hands and says mah)....lol.....awesome

  • LOKI On Thursday, December 14, 2006, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    *applauds*you on a great write.Abd I agree with Guillotine.masterful line

  • Guillotine On Thursday, December 14, 2006, Guillotine (172)By person wrote:

    "another fallen angel on the wings of a tear drop" were the lines which most left an impact on me, a stunning write in the superb.

  • ShardsofSilence On Thursday, December 14, 2006, ShardsofSilence (222)By person wrote:

    damn. That's all I can say.

  • Aunty Depressant On Thursday, December 14, 2006, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    Wow, I'm not sure what to say,...hope I have not made people feel like that,...but probably have in years past. "dance and sweat to the heart on a deathbed" *recollects bed torched and why...been on both sides most have been I suppose.

  • A former member wrote: damn this was good. ~ red

  • A former member wrote: .."close your eyes, let it stop i'll only be a thought another fallen angel on the wings of a tear drop"..those are beautiful lines. your crypt is bewitching.

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