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Comments by DeprivedOfReason

""pitching darts onto your chest my voice reaching its feminine heights sprawled across your ear drum sending your only moments of passion" the imagery just rapes my head *-*"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "And I Loved You" by Sticky Kitty

"Fucking Gorgeous Kitty "
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "And I Loved You" by Sticky Kitty

"Ahhh Yes... A perfect circle... Go back to sleep indeed. love the vidoe to this song... so political, so anti-bush-shit. Great inspiration for a piece too .. obviously"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "when oblivion fucks a whisper (go back to sleep)" by whisperer

"~Arches brow~ Talk about redecorating darlin' ... goober"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "something to chew on" by whisperer

"*Speechless* Oh dave...((playfully punches your arm)) heh.. you flatterer... @smiles gratefully@ there are no words just ... t h an k y ou "
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "*-%^@%" by darkleprechaun

""speak softly traffic heart" this was awesome... such great metaphors..."we held our hopes high in the bringing to close of past affairs" some real raw images youve created here-look foward to seeing you stick around"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on ""spring air leaves an air of silent remorse" (1.26.05)" by Buckwise McDickermeat

"haha..cute suicide 'legs' ..that comment could almmost be construed as provocative..;)"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "- As I Lay Dying -" by DeprivedOfReason

"thank you, for an honest critique always a pleasure from one Brain dead Poet to the next ;)"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Fuck Me Gently With A Chainsaw" by DeprivedOfReason

"which i realize can cause some controversy, but i by no means am diminishing ones faith..or insulting it..just that in the end -god- is j u s t a word..and not one person has the same one meaning for it. "
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Fuck Me Gently With A Chainsaw" by DeprivedOfReason

"I used 'god' more as metaphor of this persons mental, emotional scapegoat. 'god', with its many connotations, makes it difficult for one to discern the true semantic's in which i'm utilizing. "
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Fuck Me Gently With A Chainsaw" by DeprivedOfReason

"the person whom inspired this piece..mm.. represents everything i defy.. to a sense..he claims his "god" is watching over me..mm but i dont mean god probably in the way you're thinking .."
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Fuck Me Gently With A Chainsaw" by DeprivedOfReason

"i think this was fantastic babe... i was captivated the whole way through.. with greaat rhyme..touching tale"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Ice King, Ice Queen (and me)" by Shaded Angel

""You're killing me and I'm loving it bruises forming finally look me in the eyes locks tangled between your fingers oh god, you're eyes don't match your soul " Exquisitely shocking"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Soul Sex" by Sticky Kitty

"mmm ... ive been waiting for your next write for the longest that im just elated to see a new piece from you .. WRITE MORE!! damn it .. you got fans in need for more of your blatant tongue and crooked mind."
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Kitty wants to fuck you, here I am for you" by Sticky Kitty

"hmm... yes hmmm... wordless am i ... im sorry dave.. you feel this way.. i dont know if you used ::she:: as a metaphor.. im just overjoyed to have you writing again, and being privy to it..to parts of you "
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "123" by darkleprechaun

"ha.. the first two stanzas i could kiss, at how you've seamlessly captured a thought inside my head. I cant do anything else but laugh to myself.."
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "216" by darkleprechaun

"if i could speak of the torrential erosions immersed from me by this piece.. i would fall to my knees and cry air at the attempt.. all i can do is let my heart come undone in rifts..oh dave"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "18" by darkleprechaun

"Fuck lenghty, this was perfect. Heh, a bit depressing, but hey that's life. All you said has been thought world-wide, you've expressed it quintessentially with rhyme. An absolite Fave of mine, thanks for writing it;)"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Lively Deceased" by happilydepressed

"This is essentially one my fave of yours, truly thought provoking, gritty, to your face. Quite a poet we got here ;)."
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "You Ran [Away]" by BleedSilver

"ouu ~@admiringly strokes the words on screen@~ Puurrty, me likeee a lot. Heh, shit this was awesome man, the imagery evoked was kick ass. The words easily empathized."
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Flawed.Empty.Torture" by BleedSilver

"Lascivious, prurient, and full of sexual decadence, loved it babe, i can only ponder at the source of your inspirations.. we should party"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "SEX SLAVE (for i am YOUR god)" by Sticky Kitty

"(*instant fave*) ~squeezes Kitty~ how i loooove your 'sharp' jagged edge girly... you say it as it comes.. with no apologies, my kinda girl .. i mean writing.. haha"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Paper Cut" by Sticky Kitty

"ouuu all the imagery and metaphors are intoxicating, i'm drowing, and willingly breathing in your words, though they may inspire the death of me.. toxic!"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "I'm due to marry my fiance's best friend" by Sticky Kitty

"tick,tock,tick,tock ...me like, me love, time still ticks .. so you must continue to write,& i shall continue to like"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Stop The Clock" by island warrior

""You moan and scream his name, only a towel answers" Priceless, tehee can't go wrong with raw carnal words "
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "Gushing Fuck with Sex" by Sticky Kitty

"Dave, Only your words on page can be as striking and deadly as when they escape from your tongue, we all stand entranced ;)"
Posted by DeprivedOfReason on "12" by darkleprechaun

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