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Stop The Clock
By island warrior
I need some help
I'm here everyday
Unable to resist
The temptation to stay
I feel so much pain
Life's not the same
Forever wishing
For a positive change
Let me turn back the clock
Then put on a lock
So time never reaches
The point life is lost
Haunted by blame
Partnered with shame
Cutting in on the moment
Then dancing away
To lose myself
How hard could that be
I'll be anybody else
Just don't make me be me
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Copyright 2005 island warrior
Published on Tuesday, February 1, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Stop The Clock"
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, Future of Despond
(72)
wrote:
Well done, nice ending.
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
ohh...this is so wonderfully done. the flow is captivating in and of itself, and the meaning of the write strikes me so hard.its like looking into the mirror of my mind;reading this. i love it.
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On Friday, February 4, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
ahhh, awesome rhythm, ironically reminds the rhythm reminds of the impossibility of stopping the flow of time..... your message is potent..... great work. Thank you.
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On Thursday, February 3, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
Ahh! Wonderful flowing piece...great message, well spoken...you did a marvelous job with the rhyming here! ~b
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On Thursday, February 3, 2005, DeprivedOfReason
(30) wrote:
tick,tock,tick,tock ...me like, me love, time still ticks .. so you must continue to write,& i shall continue to like
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
sad and powerful....
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
great write
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Psyko
(26) wrote:
very powerful write ~Nick~
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
I believe there is a god that holds the pendulum of time......interesting request in the last line.......?~elisa
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