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"spring air leaves an air of silent remorse" (1.26.05)
By Buckwise McDickermeat
we walked, so staggered, so desperate,
like the weighted shoulders we leaned on would last eternally,
if only for the moment we needed them.
we held our hopes high in the bringing to close of past affairs,
where each stalk could grow in a rebirth of congeniality,
those leaves rustled, so crisp and perfect,
spring air leaves an air of silent remorse.
speak softly traffic heart,
for as these moments tremble
they're fleeting, but they're still there.
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Copyright 2005 Buckwise McDickermeat
Published on Thursday, April 7, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, DeprivedOfReason
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wrote:
"speak softly traffic heart" this was awesome... such great metaphors..."we held our hopes high in the bringing to close of past affairs" some real raw images youve created here-look foward to seeing you stick around
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
you kick ass dude
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
you continuosly a ma z e me. your words are like fire, delicate and strong, powerful and so engulfing. the imagery you create in my mind is fantastic---'like the weighted shoulders we leaned on would last eternally'~~damn fine line--excellent*piece.
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