Comments by The Zebra Warrior
- "hol yuffing heck-holes this was totally exceptional, despite the sombre subject and the nned to face it you devised and conjured such elegant, imaginative, fertive words, unusual and original metaphors and unique symbolisms; chock-loaded with emotion - not messily, but directly. The poignancy was sharp but never overwhelming; you gave this everything without over-exerting. Amazed to find this one somehow slipped me by...until now. Death is always one of the most key subjects in all of poetry, but you won't find many more original takes on it than reading this one...amazing poetry"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Open Casket " by Mylissa
- "for your then-age I was awed by what you could articulate in words....prodigal gift. If only you'd have stayed and engaged more often...such a shame to wonder why poets like you are so reticent and in limbo; would loved to have read more frequent works by you...real shame"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "edenian forevers (ana)" by Cassandra
- "crazy stream of conscious esque poem woith all manner of rattling details, and deaths, the theatrical ponderings and punctuatings, this works like a parody with a burlesque-like quality - strange, modernistic ravings of a deranged mind; yet there's so much more tucked in there...also very original and much different than your average DP post....spectacular language and presentation, I really enjoyed reading something like this today...well done Mr.Cloud :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Widow Mandolin Fur" by Bella Butchery
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