False Hope

By Armour

The Angels feather fallen to the ground.
Stuck in my back, is this feather I found.
No, I'm not an angel, but false hope to be.
I'll instill you with life, until I'm ready to leave.
Uncontrolling, I move through life.
I feel like a destined knife.
Masked in pleasure, I give you this pain.
I won't cut an artery,
but I will cut a vein.


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© 2006 Armour
Published on Tuesday, May 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ShardsofSilence On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, ShardsofSilence (222)By person wrote:

    Hmm..short as it is, it is very well written, but I feel there could be more perhaps...

  • Armour On Tuesday, June 6, 2006, Armour (3)By person wrote:

    Do you guys like this work? It has gotten the most views by almost double. Yet, no one leaves any comments.

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