Comments by Gideon Lost
- "Interesting write here. I like the "make your own metaphor" approach. It is almost as if this is reader participation poetry. I like it. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "The Real Me" by A Burning God
- "Very nice poem here Bard. I really like your rhythm and word flow here. Almost a stream of consciousness feel. Great style man. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Madness IV" by TheBardOfBlasphemy
- "Bard, this is a great write. "If I could draw, I would bind this beast to canvas.
It would dwarf the most hideous vision.
" This is greatness. You are so powerfully succinct here. Very Nice. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Madness X" by TheBardOfBlasphemy
- "Cmon now Lippy, this was the first thing I ever wrote. This was the beginning of my flood. Glad you liked it. Hope ya come back to read more! -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "The Pool" by Gideon Lost
- ""speaking in tongues marked by periods of silence." love this line. The whole piece made me want to meet this person. Great job. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "she spoke sanguine." by Six-Out
- "This is a great piece. I simply love the sound of the language. I actually find myself sounding out the words so eloquently put. Plus the extra little pun in the end was a slam dunk. Great write! -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "Nice work SluG. It would be nice if we COULD just keep the memories and let someone else bear the burden of heartache. Good sentiment. -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "My Special Design" by SluG
- ""The grinding gets louder, My bones are only powder." Great line. I picture someone angrily grinding their teeth down til their whole head is gone. Bravo! -Gideon"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Like Everyone Else" by wannabe_rebel
- "Very powerfully written. "Mankind roasts upon it,
Apple in mouth," Beautiful, just beautiful.
-Gideon
"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "The Candle Men" by Doc
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