It's a (Fucking) Fairytale

By wannabe_rebel

~because "I love you" doesn't even come close to expressing how I feel~


in the pleasure that is pain,
you bite down on my lip (hard);
I yelp sharply and you smile,
then gently move my hair
away from the two mirrors in my face
(they only ever reflect you)

you bring bruises out beautifully
in my neck with your mouth
and teeth enveloping my skin.

you whisper home-made poetry
that slides gracefully into my ears
(they only ever hear you)
and I shed silent tears
and grasp you ever closer
(if that's even possible)

I wrap myself impatiently around you
and still feel much too far away
"I love you" never sounded so pure
as when it cascaded from your mouth
(it never felt so inadequate to say)

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Copyright 2005 Kristin Hubbard
Published on Tuesday, September 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "It's a (Fucking) Fairytale"

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  • Lotophagi On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    awesome write. I love the concept, love the content..... Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: wonderfully written. "you bring bruises out beautifully"..i love that.

  • Gideon Lost On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    What a delicious poem. -Gideon

  • AHHH On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    ha, the title and the poem. perfect for eachother.

  • Dei On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    YOu are beautiful! this was amazing.

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