the dawn of thought

By Griffin

and in a spark of lighting there was water, and from that came a fish.

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Published on Tuesday, August 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Short Story"
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  • the dried flower On Saturday, October 15, 2005, the dried flower (67)By person wrote:

    short & simple & sweet (i like)

  • Jonas On Friday, September 9, 2005, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    from an irreverant artists point of view: freakin' nice. from the view of someone judging an essay contest: this is not an essay.

  • Griffin On Sunday, September 11, 2005, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    it wasn't just an essay contest Mr. fishy.

  • Liz On Friday, September 2, 2005, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    So is the fish thinking, or was the spark of lightning actually neurons transfering information, and creating a little fishy thought in your brain?

  • elisa On Friday, September 2, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ....maybe two fish:)

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, September 2, 2005, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    My dad used to take my brothers and I fishing, we never could catch that damned fish.

  • Gideon Lost On Thursday, September 1, 2005, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    Minimalist. I like it. -Gideon

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Thursday, September 1, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    ...and then there was fish-fingers ... and god was pleased

  • Doc On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, Doc (145)By person wrote:

    indeed

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