SCENE KIDS

By Possesion

you weren't invited to the martyrs ball scene kid,
watch them though as they party in the halls,
art deco style your fashion is so outdated.
Yeah you say your tough, you hit a kritickill pit once.
Yeah you say your not, but your an emo kid hardcore.
Take off those clothes, and wash your hair.
You need a trim,
nobody is looking at you like your unique.
Boys boys, Those are MY pants!
Whore me whore me, pass on this link!
Look at me! I write poetry!
My favorite line ' Watch me die '
or ' No one will miss me '
Well who payed for your pretty clothes?
And who pays for your hair dye?
Who sent you to that place you avoid?
Where you need to get an education.

You know what's funny,
You get everything I want,
But I still can't seem to envy you.

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Copyright 2005 Shay Holland
Published on Sunday, September 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • Err0r On Saturday, July 14, 2007, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    haha Rock on! This is so true. :D

  • Mari On Sunday, October 15, 2006, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    the last 3 lines are insanely awesome

  • Thorn On Wednesday, November 30, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    I fucking hate scene kids. I tip my hat to you.

  • AHHH On Sunday, September 18, 2005, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    BRAVO! BRAVO! complete perfection.

  • MidSummers Eve On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, MidSummers Eve (38)By person wrote:

    Damn right, stupid freaking emo bastards....! Well ranted.

  • Possesion On Saturday, September 10, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    Well, Because these kids get the things i desire and have the freedom to misuse them i'm often accused of 'envy' rather than pity..

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, September 10, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    hehehe. more like pity than envy i'd say :)

  • Doc On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    hahaha, very nice

  • A former member wrote: this made me smile

  • Possesion On Monday, September 5, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    'we love to see you smile'

  • Gideon Lost On Sunday, September 4, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    Shay, you have painted a contemporary picture of an ageless theme. Very good work here. -Gideon

  • Possesion On Monday, September 5, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much.

  • A former member wrote: I like this....it has a kind of dark sarcasm which really is enjoyable

  • elisa On Sunday, September 4, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    i would need to borrow hands to count how many times i've thought the same thing....it's beyond insulting to read fabricated emotions of shit that i've actually lived by some attention whore that thinks misery is beautiful........from a distance.

  • Possesion On Sunday, September 4, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    I know, it just crawls rightu nder my skin. makes me say " Grrr " and grit my teeth and walk on.

  • elisa On Sunday, September 4, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    ..yeah but they follow behind...........that's what vultures do to survive......it's like being in a war on the front line while the pussy's cower way behind criticizing the hero's because of envy.

  • Possesion On Monday, September 5, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    and they wait for the heroes to fall, before they take their reign.

  • A former member wrote: hmmm.... scene kids... ....-samone

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