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Perfection
By l mo
You want us to be like you,
But that's not what we want.
You want us to be Christians,
I'm an atheist, Sis is a Buddhist.
You want us to follow in your footsteps,
But we want to choose our own futures.
You want us to be comformists,
But we want to be ourselves.
You want us to be perfection,
But thing is that we're not.
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Copyright 2005 night_sky
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(257)
wrote:
Welcome to my world, I grew up as a pagan in a mostly catholic neighborhood. It sucks, don't it?
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On Friday, August 29, 2008, Lethie
(12) wrote:
I like for it's simplicity it also gives the thoughts of the child clearly.
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On Friday, September 30, 2005, cyan9
(7) wrote:
Somewhat simple for a poem, in that sense it gets the point across, but there is nothing elegant or poetic in the language used, there is an arguement for free expression, but this is more of a speach than a poem.
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On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
DAMN fathers.
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On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
what is perfect to you? interesting wrt. thought provoked. this made me want to answer your question...s
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On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
To me, there is no such thing as perfect, but to my dad, there is. Everyone has their flaws, some are just better at hiding them than others. As for me, I'n one of the "others"
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On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, Gideon Lost
(137) wrote:
Jesus is not a Republican!! (but who am I to say) -Gideon
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On Thursday, September 1, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
neither am i
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