The Candle Men

By Doc

The fire quivers beneath fingers,
Its hides, but only often,
Mankind roasts upon it,
Apple in mouth,
Honor tied behind,
Bound behind his back.

The wax drips forth,
Filling the crevice of its mantle,
The mind wanders waiting for elevation,
Happiness drips forth into the world,
Filling the cracks,
Providing the numbness so common to it,
The red wax, blood of God,
Melted upon the world,
Jesus wept for this.

I am the Alpha and Omega,
I illuminate your faults and transgressions,
I do not forgive, merely enslave,
All those who put goodness before Gold,
Who’s eyes not view the right path of hate,
I am your King,
At least until I burn out.

SizzleSizzleSizzle,
Cigarettes lit from its power,
Burned to ashes, smokeless and obscure,
The world looks upon as it falls into darkness,
No, never darkness, enlightenment.

BURNINGMYHANDBURNSNOJESUSCHRISTGETITOFF
God stares down at the mere candle men,
He strikes them down,
A whip through the mind of the eternal forgiveness,
The rest of us bound to follow.

Two round holes exist in my hand,
One for every sin I've been forgiven.

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Copyright 2005 Doc
Published on Wednesday, August 31, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "For every sin I've been forgiven," you Doc...are an artist of profound understand and timeless thoughts. A beast of blood and bone rising from the ashes. Simply profound.-Memory

  • ApathysKiss On Thursday, October 6, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    (misspell - forgiven) whoa! i did not expect this, the title proposed a cryptic piece, but i am blown away by the content, the depth, the poetry! excellent descriptive movement and flow,

  • ApathysKiss On Thursday, October 6, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    that alpha omega stanza was paralysing...and the last two lines were are eerily prominent.~m~

  • mysticventures On Monday, September 26, 2005, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    ummm... profound shit

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    the last line strikes at my poetic existance...........fierce and articulate...........well done.........urban

  • Gideon Lost On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, Gideon Lost (137)By person wrote:

    Very powerfully written. "Mankind roasts upon it, Apple in mouth," Beautiful, just beautiful. -Gideon

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