Comments by purr_verse
- "All hail True Quality. This is outstanding. The emptiness of sensation, microcosms and importance and the lack thereof; the thought-provoking depth of this... Damn, I can never comment properly on the exceptional stuff. *bows*"
Posted by purr_verse on "the late thaw of this american spring" by Jonas
- "I'll keep it simple: You're a damn fine writer. This is excellent."
Posted by purr_verse on "zygote" by Jonas
- "(alliteration not planned. Huh. Odd) Fantastic look in and through the mirror; feels like genius."
Posted by purr_verse on "a man of me" by Jonas
- "(warning: dodgy pun approaching, tenuously related to last line) I'll bite. ... Intensely internal, insightful and intelligent. ("
Posted by purr_verse on "a man of me" by Jonas
- "ahh, quiet fantasies...so much less complicated than the full 3D experience... This is marvellously expressed; clear without overstatement, and...well, just right. I realise the banality of that last statement, and I'm sorry for my lack of clearer express"
Posted by purr_verse on "abstract ideations of comfort and co-dependancy" by Jonas
- "lovely; beautiful imagery in a thoughtful and quietly direct write... wonderful as always."
Posted by purr_verse on "to wander" by Jonas
- "excellent meanderings; this read like a river trip somehow... Your work never disappoints. Gorgeous write."
Posted by purr_verse on "a napkin scrap" by Jonas
- "this is a beautifully written, powerfully sad piece... i found the ending quite suddenly hard-hitting. poignant and deeply melancholy, reflective write."
Posted by purr_verse on "skipping stones" by Jonas
- "this whole thing just dragged me through it, but "let me dig my everything under your skins" is just particularly of high excellence indeed. fab write; fab automata.
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Posted by purr_verse on "3 freewrite" by Jonas
- "grabbed me from the magnificent opening and didn't let go... absolutely first-class words from your hand again. just fantastic. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "seventeen years" by Jonas
- "wonderful opening couplet especially... as usual, true quality from your pen; truly great stuff."
Posted by purr_verse on "running dog" by Jonas
- "majestic surreal-so-realism again from you...i love the way you weave words. beautiful. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "buzzkill" by Jonas
- "great in general, but i absolutely love the closing line. fabulous. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "painting" by Jonas
- "just damn fabulicious. wonderfully written. (made me think of don marquis and ts eliot and goddamn that doesn't happen often...) purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "mr. van pelt" by Jonas
