skull and cross-bones
By Jonas
any time he said
either you or i
and every time he'd push
the flies'd multiply
leave me alone he said
cause he knew his words
would sound like bad
goth poetry
so he'd read alone in subway stations
and his ears would echo with the sound
of trains
that carry me away
carry with the sound
and if it's day or night
i don't know
underground
curses to the world he said
and he meant it too
this one for me
and that one for you
he dressed in silence
every morning and pulled
the shade to the window
to the world
coming down
like rain
that washes me away
rushes with the sound
wont come up for air
wont ever be
found
any time he said
either you or i
and for every inch he'd give
he'd take the world wide
and he thought
that if god knew
what he was thinking
he'd never get to heaven
he'd never get to heaven
Comments on "skull and cross-bones"
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A former member wrote:
hmmmmm this tale spins a weave of solitude and selfconsciousness... something of fear here expressed eloquently and somewhat opaquely as well
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A former member wrote:
very well done.
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A former member wrote:
you know your shit this is the best i've read
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A former member wrote:
wow, indeed..
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
wow, Jonas. wow. please play this for me sometime?
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On Monday, May 23, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
this is really strong, just, from the first line your plunged staraight into it, ...very cool in how its written, movielike in presentation, in a way, i kept readin again and again through this, truly, a special work
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
yes, I agree...the cadence and story both fantastic. Beautifully done.