mr. van pelt

By Jonas

mr. van pelt knows that god still breathes in this world
it was a viet cong rocket
slightly off its mark
as left him living but terminally shaky
and with
not much use left of his ears
but 'in the right places'
he'll often tell me with beer on his breath
having just drunk a draught of my wallet's ale
to my certainly grateful health
'you can hear his voice
a bellowing whissssssper...
and it polarizes the frosting on your cornflake bones'

mr. van pelt wants me to let you know that he hopes
on your next visit to the city
you'll have time to come meet
bathsheeba
take your shoes off in her house
lower your eyes when you meet her
you want to want her
he knows you
but you've heard?
you wont want to let her touch you

there are things that belong to something sacred

and mr. van pelt believes in love and said once
that it was what made the world go 'round
then told me the story of how
he once bagged
persephone
and of the subsequent aborted pregnancy
it's sad to see him wonder
about the features
of the child that never left the arms of god
but he'll often smile
in the midst of this
and i think he's hearing the whisper
and it bears forgivness
like the fragrance of sage

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Copyright 2003 Fish
Published on Sunday, November 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, August 9, 2017, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Still love this one. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • purr_verse On Monday, December 15, 2003, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    just damn fabulicious. wonderfully written. (made me think of don marquis and ts eliot and goddamn that doesn't happen often...) purr

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, December 8, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Wonderful piece, man! I love the lines "it's sad to see him wonder about the features of the child that never left the arms of god but he'll often smile in the midst of this and i think he's hearing the whisper and it bears forgivness" Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, December 8, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    ...that flows like a cool wind. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Stranger On Tuesday, December 2, 2003, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    I have read this almost every day for the last week. It just keeps getting better. mr. van stranger thinks that it is just too darn cool.

  • urbanhumility On Friday, November 28, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    a translator of misunderstood voices, perhaps a generous soul that will listen just for the sake of it......urban

  • MrGrieves On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, MrGrieves (2)By person wrote:

    is bathsheeba a biblical reference? its in a pixies song and i always wondered who he was talking about. good write...just like all of your works. reading your stuff is both inspiring and discouraging at the same time.

  • Six-Out On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Fish...my sun roasted niglet friend...this was wonderful. Eat my burritos.......bitch.

  • Jonas On Thursday, March 19, 2009, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    this is the best comment. ever.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Sunday, November 23, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    i am not sure what you are talking about here but its very abstract and full of allegories...a refreshing read..-l-

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