Comments by BlackVelvet Rose

  • "with notebooks tossed here and there, pieces of paper laying on the floor crumpled at the trash can, ah this is how my poet house is decorated. Pens stuck behind my ears always losing them, grabbing another, yet to find them while i searching for a crumpled piece of paper, with my hearts notes scribbled upon it. This describes my house perfectly. Thank you Faded for sharing this with us.."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "the untidiness handbook" by FadedBlues
  • "Valiant, heroic, even with faults and flaws. These things we all have but i have never seen it described exactly like this. This Sir is why i read you and enjoy writing with you. :)"
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "tapfere Madchen" by FadedBlues
  • "they are made to be broken and also need to be handled with care, although one can endure more than thought before its shatters into tiny fragmented pieces..."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "glass heart" by FadedBlues
  • "Yes, we all at times tend to do the very same thing. Sometimes good can come from it sometimes not but in the end that is what we need at the time to feel whole again... to feel, for a fleeting moment, that we are needed and loved... it is bittersweet and memories that will never fade..."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "sex w/whoever" by FadedBlues
  • "sometimes its hard to recognize that things that are right in front of your face and you need to step back and look at them from a different perspective to see the complete view. Just because something looks like it is the woman's fault the tables can be turned and it can just as well we be mans fault. either way the burden to bear lies within both and you have made some good points here Faded. You made me cry bringing back memories i would rather no remember but you made me see things through different eyes so to speak. Thank you Sir for opening my eyes...."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "too many women" by FadedBlues
  • "i think we stay because that is who we are... always trying to make things work but instead having them end up in a fight... but there are a sheltered few who will stay through anything and give all they have to the one they love... and to be honest it really doesn't matter what that person says or does they will never leave even if they are told do so...."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "she calls me baby" by FadedBlues
  • "this most deffinately is about a poet... their journey through lifes trials and tribulations... but it is about love and all of the emotions that come with it also.... i have always enjoyed reading you and collabing when we have mutual ground for a foundation.... thank you hon for sharing this ;))) M..."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "this ain't abt a poet" by FadedBlues
  • "The midnight hour hold such pleasures and wonderous curiosities.... In the grand scheme of things these feelings mean something as it should always be ....... M...."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "you're such a poet" by FadedBlues
  • "I wonder if those big brown eyes have cried... shed the tears of servitude for Ones pleasure...interesting depth i read into this... almost as if i have been there.... ;) M..."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "nerium love" by FadedBlues
  • "Things aren't always pretend... there will be one and only one that can satisfy that fire in ways others cannot, whether it be a dirty lil whore, a slave girl, or a true love... there is always one willing to do anything for that one person...."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "my pretend lover" by FadedBlues
  • "There is always one moment in time that stands out when everything else is forgotten... a touch, a kiss, a glance sent your way, softly spoken words in the throws of passion... everything comes together in that one moment and you realize that is what you were born for..."
    Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "the moment (you were born for)" by FadedBlues
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