broken moon sangria

By FadedBlues

 

the moon was broken

the sangria was sweet

did we worry about it then?

we marched to the sound

of the drums that beat

in the hearts of lusty men!

 

there were battles to fight

there were women to love

and the dreams that set our course!

we would conquer the day

with the valor of heroes

and without regret or remorse.

 

but the road winds thru hell

and fate is a tiger

with a taste for a dour man’s meat.

the mountain repelled us

and the sea overwhelmed us

we were battered and lost in defeat.

 

we are nomads still

in a blistering land

and the Lord our souls may keep!

but we long for the warmth

of a feathery bed

and the women who wait…

and weep.




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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Sunday, February 24, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Sunday, May 20, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    It takes an immense amount of talent to convey something without harmony. Thank you.

  • Stephanie Sideways On Sunday, March 3, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Rather stunning. The rhyme scheme was great.

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. the dreams may wither & die, but the heart stays lusty...

  • Nehema On Monday, February 25, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    War is hell, yeah yeah... Surviving war is the real hell, the moments and days leading to the battlefield... My god the horror that must be endured, you make me feel it. The soldiers longing for home, warmth and their love - is there anything more grotesque than putting boys, men and those that love them in this situation? Ah...but if not for these situations would they ever realize the same depth of emotion and value of their love? One wonders, or at least I do, lol - XXOO Scholar

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Sunday, February 24, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    I agree with Dev Faded..... excellent ;) Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    The glory and hell of war, more hell than anything. Especially for those who lose someone to it. Awesome write FB. Cool. Later -

  • dwells On Sunday, February 24, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    And still they weep and some always will, touching and positively perfect, thanks!

  • M Morgan On Sunday, February 24, 2013, M Morgan (198)By person wrote:

    UAU! Is hot here, the other side of equator! Poet, you describe so well the lust on our hearts! UFA!!!!

  • Devilish On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh why oh why oh why do you do this to me. i'm left staring at the screen lost in the visuals and feel you release. then dumbfound on a comment. i love you sir. thank you for being alive and thank you for sharing your beautiful mind. Scholar

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