broken moon sangria
By FadedBlues
the moon was broken
the sangria was sweet
did we worry about it then?
we marched to the sound
of the drums that beat
in the hearts of lusty men!
there were battles to fight
there were women to love
and the dreams that set our course!
we would conquer the day
with the valor of heroes
and without regret or remorse.
but the road winds thru hell
and fate is a tiger
with a taste for a dour man’s meat.
the mountain repelled us
and the sea overwhelmed us
we were battered and lost in defeat.
we are nomads still
in a blistering land
and the Lord our souls may keep!
but we long for the warmth
of a feathery bed
and the women who wait…
and weep.
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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Sunday, February 24, 2013.
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On Sunday, May 20, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
It takes an immense amount of talent to convey something without harmony. Thank you.
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On Sunday, March 3, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Rather stunning. The rhyme scheme was great.
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. the dreams may wither & die, but the heart stays lusty...
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On Monday, February 25, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
War is hell, yeah yeah... Surviving war is the real hell, the moments and days leading to the battlefield... My god the horror that must be endured, you make me feel it. The soldiers longing for home, warmth and their love - is there anything more grotesque than putting boys, men and those that love them in this situation? Ah...but if not for these situations would they ever realize the same depth of emotion and value of their love? One wonders, or at least I do, lol - XXOO
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
I agree with Dev Faded..... excellent ;)
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
The glory and hell of war, more hell than anything. Especially for those who lose someone to it. Awesome write FB. Cool. Later -
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
And still they weep and some always will, touching and positively perfect, thanks!
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
UAU! Is hot here, the other side of equator! Poet, you describe so well the lust on our hearts! UFA!!!!
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On Sunday, February 24, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Oh why oh why oh why do you do this to me. i'm left staring at the screen lost in the visuals and feel you release. then dumbfound on a comment. i love you sir. thank you for being alive and thank you for sharing your beautiful mind.