tapfere Madchen
By FadedBlues
when I found her, I had no poem.
her eyes held questions & inquisitions,
theories & assumptions -
her eyes held epiphanies.
but not stars. there were no stars in her eyes.
into her ear, I chanted a sad song,
which did not alter her countenance.
the melody of the song,
and the message of the song,
drifted tepidly down her cheeks.
but not like tears. not at all like tears.
when she showed me her heart, there were
love-notes clinging, from distant lovers,
long gone away, the words not faded
but clear, so dear did she hold them.
not of feathers nor flowers, as penned
by a minstrel or bard. not at all rococo.
the robe she wore was a composition,
lexicon of a language unknown to me,
yet somehow I understood, though
bewildered that it lacked gatherings
of ruby & sapphire, amethyst & peridot -
nor even golden brocade.
she was not a goddess, nor a witch.
she was not Galatea, nor Medusa.
not an apparition, nor a lachrymose dream.
she was herself -
because it was all she needed to be.
and when I found her, I did not need a poem…
she was the poem.
Comments on "tapfere Madchen"
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A former member wrote:
It is a very gentle, tender poem, full of charm and love. Quite good and lovely.
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On Friday, June 14, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
Valiant, heroic, even with faults and flaws. These things we all have but i have never seen it described exactly like this. This Sir is why i read you and enjoy writing with you. :)
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A former member wrote:
Man. i'm just going to favourite this and leave it at that. Classic, this.
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On Wednesday, June 12, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends,thanks. title it 'valiant Maiden' in German...
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On Monday, June 10, 2013, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
Your words did what no other poem has done for me. Today I read this post and I cried. This is the love that broken hearts need. This is true. This is beautiful. Thank you for it. Sincerely.
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A former member wrote:
"into her ear, I chanted a sad song, which did not alter her countenance" - Another piece of magnificence has just come out of your pen. So finely detailed and wonderfully wrought.
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A former member wrote:
I find openings and endings to be difficult to follow up on, but you seem to write them with an ease I'm a bit envious of haha. Not my usual taste but I like the grace you held with this piece as it progressed. It's difficult to write romance without tired metaphors and I think you surpassed that issue. Nicely done.
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On Sunday, June 9, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I get taken away, to far off wonders of beauty and amazement when I read your poetry!! There is such beauty in your words !! Thank you for that ~^_^~
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On Sunday, June 9, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
I loved the ending! A beautiful engrossing piece by you as always. :)
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On Sunday, June 9, 2013, Electric-Chair
(121) wrote:
this was the most beautiful write on acceptance, simply poetic beauty !
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On Sunday, June 9, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
Just a simple woman that on front of your eyes she is just what you want and need.
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On Sunday, June 9, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
No paraphernalia , no fancy dressings, no expectations other than to be.... Uncomplicated in simplify......but so very beautiful..... In an undefinable, mind warming quality. X x xx