Bloodrose Garden ~ (with Lilith Rose)
By FadedBlues
in the garden along the path we walked as the breeze
rode upon soft sighs and silent whispers played with
innocent smiles. a rush of fevered glances under the
majestic trees while their canopy’s dance and sparkle
with emeralds
green.
the leaves fall silently with each caress, each embrace
pooling at our feet only to be whisked away by the northern
breeze. as they dance upon their tattered edges shining as
silver stars within this prism of moonlight falling upon the
calm stream,
cradled asleep in their rippled bed.
as i dream these dreams,
the feathering wind calls our names
eternally entwined in this lovers
web blessed with shimmering
tears. my visions foretold of shadows floating warm upon the
mid-summer’s night embraced within the mist, brown in my
lovers eyes, held within his heart upon this silent night in
eternity conceived
within Eve’s Garden.
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my Victoria, so pretty, so innocent,
and sadly, so trusting.
we made a vow to live and love
forever in this
sumptuous garden, and gladly I would have followed
her into her dream, and remained all of our days…
but the demons have returned, those that possessed me
many years
ago, and ordered me to take the ax that rested
by the stately oak
tree, to hack an aging father and a sickly
mother, and burn down
our cottage to hide my sins.
thereafter, imprisoned in the
asylum and secretly tortured,
until I strangled a nurse and stole
her key. and then weeks
of running…
at last, by
undeserved fortune, Victoria discovered my frail
form in this very
garden. like an angel of mercy, she restored
my health, and never
questioned my intrusion into the elegance
of her life. of course,
we fell in love.
but the demons will not allow our happiness.
they will my hand,
and the unforgiving knife. blindly, I plunge the
hideous weapon
into her breast, breasts that have excited and comforted
me
these past glorious nights. Victoria screams, and then she screams
no more…
dear Victoria, the blood on the roses will
be your legacy.
Author's Note:
we two strolled this garden...Comments on "Bloodrose Garden ~ (with Lilith Rose)"
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On Wednesday, March 20, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. I think we may have wandered into Poe's garden...
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A former member wrote:
Interesting and Astonishing
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A former member wrote:
Blissful imagery fading into haunted horrors, of bloodied roses within this garden of beauty and perfection. This is by far one of the best collabs I've read. Amazing piece of Art
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
A stroll in this garden is one thing... to kill was the best ending. Thank you Faded.. as always is a joy working with you.
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
Someone there is not happy!!! Someone who loved him terribly but offered yourself to sacrifice. And someone loved with kill will. Perfect poem!!!! You can not deny who you really are.
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Absolutely perfect. How can you not love a stroll like this. I want to go next time and suck the feeling off both of your fingers.. Tell her hello. Much love.
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
Hello to you as well Dev :)