Comments by Aleas
- "Man, it's tough. To get through something like that intact, and remain a functional and contributional human being. It should never be a choice. It should never be so bad that there is actually belief that there IS a choice. I'm sorry."
Posted by Aleas on "Buried" by SilentStalker
- "Fretted fifth, accidental, tremelo whammy flamenco spanish beat slap pop tapped harmonic. In B. Because I want all sharps / flats in my comment. Feels like this couldve been made into a bigger, more grand, piece of work. Left me wanting more written, more explain, more delved. More."
Posted by Aleas on "arpeggio, whole tone, minor, [diminished]" by heroineyes
- "Kind of interesting. Humans see in spectrums of red, blue and green. When all three cones are activated, that's when we see white. So to say "we've never even seen white" is to say despite it all, we've really been blind all along. Not sure if that's what you were intending, but it's still a neat little connection."
Posted by Aleas on "absence of white" by disposable
- "One evil against another...I sure wish it didn't have to be tit for tat. Stupid human psyche leaves ignoring and playing the better person so damn hard! Love the picture of you and the baby. She looks...ecstatic! "
Posted by Aleas on "One Mind" by RubyXero
- "Man, I dig this. Like a ghost in the dark. The kind of picture someone shows you right before some horrible accident takes your head clean off."
Posted by Aleas on "eternally unfinished" by belo desgraca
- "Capstone? Dont look now, but they've got recurring characters signed for Saw VI. And I've heard rumors of at least 7, though those rumors are a coupl'a years old."
Posted by Aleas on "Review of "SAW V"" by DIATRICUS
- "Hey, that bastard (paper) knows our inner most secrets, desires and fantasies. And she's completely neutral in her discretions. No bad mouthing pen and paper. "
Posted by Aleas on "damned pen & paper!" by allenthepope
- "It's a shame this series wasn't comment on with more ferver. I really enjoyed them all. A welcomed breath of fresh air and change of pace to a place where smiling poems are few and far between."
Posted by Aleas on "Peace(ful) at last..." by DIATRICUS
- "I dont know...I kinda think its cool that everything I've done in my life has led me to the point I am right now. Maybe not having subconscious control over everything can be a bit unnerving, but still, i think it's fascinating that maybe, just maybe, my life's been guided by an unseen force, to help me get to the place I need to go. Obstacles only hinder for as long as you let them, so I can't blame "whatever" for those. Right?"
Posted by Aleas on "Fate is Fickle but Free Will is a Bitch" by TheUltimateOutlaw
- "Ha! Man, I just said my comment in chatterbox...but Im going to repeat it. I love the free flow rhythm spoken feel of this. Makes me all giddy, even after posting something that really made me feel like crap. You rock."
Posted by Aleas on "Bantering (back by demand)" by TheUltimateOutlaw
- "Paaaaaace yourself. =p I can't say that Im a fan of the "blurp" style this is. I think certain lines might have a bit more punch if this were structured a bit differently. The last line by itself was a nice touch and is exactly what I mean, but que sera sera. Who's really here for my entertainment and judgment anyway?"
Posted by Aleas on "in the darkness of the night" by BrokenAngel
- "I honestly think the three poems altogether would have made for an interesting piece, as opposed to three separate works (all good in the own right). Different strokes for d'fr'n folks, I s'pose."
Posted by Aleas on "God's backyard" by BrokenAngel
- "That's certainly one way to look at such things. This reminded me of someone in an insane asylum, hunched in fetal position in the corner, muttering to herself these things while picking apart her hair and face. The psych tech comes in with the syringe ':` "no fear", and then bam, the screen goes black."
Posted by Aleas on "11 days more of heartbeats" by estherbell
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