Ode to my second night stand....

By ashrain

You: sitting there with "saul williams" flowing your words with his drawing all eyes to you.
Me: snuck in the party late, made you miss a line when i walked in.

So funny how quickly a girl will change her mind.
"ive been calling your roommate for 3 days trying to get your number but he wont answer!"
and i fell for it.
hook
line
sinker

you didnt even wake me when you went to work
and im sure you werent going to when you got in either.
but you tripped on your own feet and fell on me
and im glad

you
silly unbalanced scale boy
me
overly analytical nieve girl

i think i myself may have something to write about

"puffy cloud organs....what is distance"

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© 2008 ashrain
Published on Sunday, November 23, 2008.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Rant"
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  • A former member wrote: I really enjoyed this second installation to a one night stand... truthful, engaging and refreshing, a lovely ode, and amazing last line.

  • Aleas On Sunday, November 23, 2008, Aleas (169)By person wrote:

    9421384028 million cool kudos points for referencing Saul Williams.

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