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Real Man
By allenthepope
what if you had that big house upon that hill
what if you did do all the right things and meet all the right people and
still had more…
like..the cars to go to the bars and find fancy people with fancy clothes,
fine shoes to rub in your face from the place that you’re not allowed
to touch or smell…
what if..? you created your own hell and cast a spell on yourself
to live and breath money and stuff but forgot what it meant to really love..really
really love..love somebody
because the cash and the diamonds and the trips around the world can’t
touch the heart and soul of a girl in love, unless the one in love, loves
the money and not their honey and then nothing is sweet..but bitter when
it hit her
that with a man she could get more money…but money can’t buy a real
man!!
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© 2008 allenthepope
Published on Monday, November 10, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Real Man"
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, Lylani
(116)
wrote:
Too true
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, BethanyBallet
(21) wrote:
Money can't buy anything, but the necessities of life. If money could buy a real man, more men would be gay. :)ily
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
*mad applause*--I couldn't agree with you more!
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Believe me there are "real men" out there you just have to wade through the muddy waters to find him...and beware of men like this...I was married to one. Loved the message here.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
I could almost photocopy this and hand it out, down the streets, in the mall, at the corner convenience store... LOL!
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Oh! please do!
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw
(44) wrote:
FYI now that i'm feeling more motivated : "you created your own hell and cast a spell on yourself to live and breath money and stuff but forgot what it meant to really love.." loved that. Its a theme that pervades alot of my own stuff.
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw
(44) wrote:
Dig the poem, but real men don't exist. I'm quite certain of that.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, Sketso
(435) wrote:
I beg to differ... some do.
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, Aleas
(171) wrote:
**Waves.
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On Monday, November 10, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw
(44) wrote:
You can not count. For the moment. :P
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