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arpeggio, whole tone, minor, [diminished]
By heroineyes
when you're mine, you'll know
all the hurting here will die...
[where] i'm barely operational
[only] light years away...
you're an actress, a
potential get-away driver,
into a twilight,
world renown for romance...
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© 2009 heroineyes
Published on Tuesday, January 20, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, December 18, 2017, Cassette
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wrote:
this is stunning...
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On Saturday, January 31, 2009, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
very nicely written, but I must agree with Aleas, Dear... I know You to be really genius; let it show.
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2009, Aleas
(171) wrote:
Fretted fifth, accidental, tremelo whammy flamenco spanish beat slap pop tapped harmonic. In B. Because I want all sharps / flats in my comment. Feels like this couldve been made into a bigger, more grand, piece of work. Left me wanting more written, more explain, more delved. More.
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A former member wrote:
wow this was superb. bravo my friend. ~ hdb.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2009, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Stunning and touching..I also loved the title. -Carl
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