Comments by nur hidayah
- "Yes, the occasional rhyme and the soft beating rhythms giving depth a vague structure made this such a beauty to read. I feel the same way about this boy I love. His power to hurt is equal only to his power to heal."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Sew My Wounds" by glasshouse
- "I was waiting for you eagerly and here you are to slap then carress with such electrifying conviction. Hmm... "tear through those hymens" w-wonderful, yes."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Ray" by DiscordiaDarling
- "I don't think a fly's purpose is for "Patience to triumph" but interesting perspective nonetheless. I think it's to tip the balance. I mean if you have the pretty butterfly, you gotta have the ugly fly. Beauty is non existent without ugliness."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Of Flies And Man" by evcfenix
- "Oh... This was beautiful. "Tree limbs shiver in anticipation/Each creaking for a star" You have put sewn a soul onto the night. What a soul it is. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Devotion to Night" by wandering druid
- "There is so much wisdom in this in its yearning for lost years. Nothing is as beautiful as the things that are gone or as sad as the things that used to be free. Beautiful, Solace. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Remembrance Agape" by Solace
- "I don't know how I missed this. Seriously, your works epitomise the feeling I get when I fall asleep and dream of something unexplainable and beautiful. You give enticing glimpses of something grand. "
Posted by nur hidayah on "inverno ~" by slow.burn.star
- "I have been waiting for slow.burn.star to post another work and here she is in all her glory. "hours beating at the windowpane like bird wings" Mm wow. I love the disquiet, the glimpses of eerie strangeness, the beauty."
Posted by nur hidayah on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "oh my God...I'm not sure if I interpreted it right but as a guilty narcissist,this hits home.Narration is effacacious,title is brilliant,the idea is simply genius.Wish I thought of it!"
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Ballad of Flattery's Doom" by purr_verse
- "Wow,this was very rhythmic. "Like it was an option, something to mull over,
swish-swash from side to side of my pretty mouth with its black jewels
click-clack-clacking against far-from-white" Very clever indeed. Pretty. Welcome to DP.I'll be watching"
Posted by nur hidayah on "[i see the lies but still trip over them]" by asphyxia
- "Thank you. Chances are someone IS watching you. Many times I have wished this stranger would know how much she has brought into my life without even knowing my name, without me even seeing her full on her face. People are whole worlds unto themselves."
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah
- "I'm a pathological liar. A serial embellisher. This struck a chord... It's beautifully written and hit the right notes. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "story weaver." by i tremble
- "Do you know Sturm Brightblade from the Dragonlance Chronicles? This reminded me of him. I wish there are men like him at this day and age. A good and true write. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Honorable Knight" by Dark Nymph
- "Yes, I agree. Orgasmic tempest! 'oceans collect in my veins' Mmm powerful. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Water born" by Sin
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