Oh Romeo...Juliet`s a bitch

By BeautifullyRuined

Do you want to die tonight
we could die together
be the Romeo and Juliet
of now
I`ll stab you
and then drink the poison
after i watch you bleed to death

oh Romeo Romeo
i`d love it
if you died

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© 2007 BeautifullyRuined
Published on Monday, May 7, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Tania On Tuesday, May 8, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    You know i loved the ending *raised a big smile* nice one elana :)

  • Dark Wing On Monday, May 7, 2007, Dark Wing (51)By person wrote:

    LOL . . . that was f*cking classic, loved the way you took a boring story that no one knows what the hell Shakespear was trying to say and told the world what you would have written. Or maybe I'm an idiot, shit I forgot I am !!!!!!!!

  • Army Barbie On Monday, May 7, 2007, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    No the ending rocked

  • BeautifullyRuined On Monday, May 7, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (94)By person wrote:

    Just something that popped in my head The ending kinda sux.

  • nur hidayah On Monday, May 7, 2007, nur hidayah (116)By person wrote:

    On the contrary, the ending clinched it well. I don't know how and why but this poem's kind of sweet.

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