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Solar Ecliptic
By Sepulcrawl
It was something drawn in the sand;
lines of disambiguation
drawn in shades of the sun.
Sometimes cutting like paper.
Crushed with a ballpeen hammer
it knows not the exuded blood
that spatters and pops.
Drawn in the garden of grains
the rays of the sun ignite
that last ounce of me which was won.
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© 2007 Sepulcrawl
Published on Sunday, April 8, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Solar Ecliptic"
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On Monday, April 9, 2007, Sin
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wrote:
Matty youre brilliant...baptized in the flames, this wept with power and feeling ~kristy
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On Monday, April 9, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
I get what elisa meant. Profundity in simplicity. Excellent.
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On Sunday, April 8, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
a shadow carving a line in the sand.....you covered the whole gamut....of drawn......i love the words behind the words...if that makes any sense:)
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On Sunday, April 8, 2007, Berry Fantastic
(28) wrote:
Thank you for writing this. :) It was {more than} a good read.
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A former member wrote:
This was beyond words. Well done :)
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On Sunday, April 8, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Intense...insanely delicious spun beautifully.
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