"Only a Dream"

By Trigger

Dreams live
Behind the eyelids
Of a sleeping child

Fantasy in full colour
SPeaking whatever truth
The dreaming child wishes to know.

Nightmares live
Behind the eyelids
Of a troubled child

Clouds in the mind
Leave the eyes to
The unseen

Pain makes touch
Vulnerable
While sound is lost

To screams

The smell is of fear
While hopes fall like bad memories
Onto the child's heart

Straining it,
Weighing it to the floor,
Next to the broken spirit

The child is rescued from this nightmare
Only by the rage of his father,
The shattering of glass,
And the slam of a door

Awake, and alone, this child wishes to sleep again.
It knows that the nightmare is,
At least

Only a dream

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© 2007 -Saeth-
Published on Monday, May 21, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Star On Tuesday, January 15, 2013, Star (879)By person wrote:

    saddening but yet oh so beautiful! amazing write (:

  • A former member wrote: Beautifuly writen, with truth blended in perfectly

  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, May 24, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I like the idea and flow of this. It's preaty nice indeed

  • DarkDruidess On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    nicely done...I too think that this flowed great...but I am afraid your words leave aching...

  • A former member wrote: this is an excellent write. i really like it. you did the repitition correctly this time kudos lol

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Monday, May 21, 2007, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    what a perfectly heartrending piece this was...just marvelous...everything flowed smoothly and left me sad at the end...-l-

  • nur hidayah On Monday, May 21, 2007, nur hidayah (114)By person wrote:

    This is sad... No child should ever prefer nightmares to reality. Thanks for sharing.

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