The End

By Lawless Fighter

A king, he came, with crown on head.
A crown of lead and beard of red.
He came, he saw and then he said,
Have we reached the end?

A priest, he came, they met this way.
His robe of gray, it would not stay.
He saw the king and spoke to say,
Can you see the end?

The king, the crown, when all hope died,
with pain his bride and tears undried,
Fell to his knees and wept and cried,
Will you tell the end?

The priest, his grace, perused his mind,
In search to find a long lost line.
But then he left and gave no sign.
Nothing of the end.

For every man and woman gone,
We add verses to our song.
And see, our song is growing long,
Still yet to reach the end. . .

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© 2007 Lawless Fighter
Published on Tuesday, November 27, 2007.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • DarkAsh On Monday, January 16, 2012, DarkAsh (45)By person wrote:

    awesome! the first random read with no bad spelling mistakes, and it's a great poem!

  • Trigger On Monday, December 31, 2007, Trigger (68)By person wrote:

    I keep singing it to greensleeves. I love this!

  • Trigger On Wednesday, December 12, 2007, Trigger (68)By person wrote:

    Oh my god!!! You can sing this to Greensleeves!!!

  • Lawless Fighter On Thursday, December 13, 2007, Lawless Fighter (37)By person wrote:

    Which you demonstrated to me more than once . . .-_-

  • Trigger On Wednesday, December 12, 2007, Trigger (68)By person wrote:

    This is impressive, have you considered putting music to it?

  • Lawless Fighter On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, Lawless Fighter (37)By person wrote:

    Ha ha. . nice assonance Mab ha ha. . . And while i am far from flawless I do appreciate the comments. . .;)

  • swing_the_hammer On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, swing_the_hammer (48)By person wrote:

    flawless rhyme... this poem reminds me of thoughts of my own poetry, some kind of trippy prophecy, poets and preachers combined... this would make a great song! L

  • A former member wrote: flawless Lawless..sorry,couldn't resist!

  • swing_the_hammer On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, swing_the_hammer (48)By person wrote:

    haha that's awesome as hell!

  • Sketso On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Loving the rhyme scheme and wonderful rhythm. One could almost imagine a bard strumming and chanting...

  • Fantecstasy On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, Fantecstasy (120)By person wrote:

    Geez... that was good. Really really good, and very true. Amazing rhyme and nice flow. "The priest, his grace, perused his mind // In search to find a long lost line." stupendous. Bravo...

  • A former member wrote: I love the rhyme.This made me think of The Door's song of the same title.....ride the king's highway,baby.

  • Niemand On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Touching...-Airi

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