I had forgotten how this feels...
By Armor for your life
One thing I will always remember
is you,
as you are right now to me.
So gentle and pristine,
this is the lightest break I have ever felt.
I can forget,
because I always forgive.
So be here now against me,
and catch whatever falls from my lips.
"I love you..."
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© 2007 Armor for your life
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2010, Kittykat
(35) wrote:
I believe humans are'nt meant to mate for life. If we can take from eachother shared experiences and be greatful for the time together and then simply move on then we are able to grow spiritually and emotionally in a positve way, Love the simplicity of this poem,
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2010, orkeric
(6) wrote:
Great work i love it keep writting
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A former member wrote:
no words........the impaling imperative soft voice of this.....leaves me wordless. and silently. .. . ..something.
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Man... You really convey the emotion so perfectly in so few words. It's quite amazing.
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On Monday, April 23, 2007, Enigma
(90) wrote:
wow I like it....good write.
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On Friday, April 20, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
This write is gentle and pristine to echo your own words.. lovely.
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
The only blissful thing about relationships/love are the memories. Wistful write. Beauty and truth in seemingly small words...
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
You really do have a unique voice. Strong, but quiet. I haven't read enough of your's. I'll have to fix that pretty soon. anyway, man. I enjoyed.
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
You are such an astounding writer. I am in awe of your talent, your passion, your voice. You are beauty dripping from a pen.
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Like an arrow straight through the heart...To love again without pain or fear of loss...fantastic stuff!
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
This was stunning in it's simplicity.
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On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
And it's a fave for me.