I had forgotten how this feels...

By Armor for your life

One thing I will always remember
is you,
as you are right now to me.
So gentle and pristine,
this is the lightest break I have ever felt.

I can forget,
because I always forgive.
So be here now against me,
and catch whatever falls from my lips.

"I love you..."

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© 2007 Armor for your life
Published on Wednesday, April 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Kittykat On Tuesday, July 27, 2010, Kittykat (35)By person wrote:

    I believe humans are'nt meant to mate for life. If we can take from eachother shared experiences and be greatful for the time together and then simply move on then we are able to grow spiritually and emotionally in a positve way, Love the simplicity of this poem,

  • orkeric On Tuesday, July 27, 2010, orkeric (6)By person wrote:

    Great work i love it keep writting

  • A former member wrote: no words........the impaling imperative soft voice of this.....leaves me wordless. and silently. .. . ..something.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Man... You really convey the emotion so perfectly in so few words. It's quite amazing.

  • Enigma On Monday, April 23, 2007, Enigma (91)By person wrote:

    wow I like it....good write.

  • Tania On Friday, April 20, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    This write is gentle and pristine to echo your own words.. lovely.

  • nur hidayah On Thursday, April 19, 2007, nur hidayah (116)By person wrote:

    The only blissful thing about relationships/love are the memories. Wistful write. Beauty and truth in seemingly small words...

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    You really do have a unique voice. Strong, but quiet. I haven't read enough of your's. I'll have to fix that pretty soon. anyway, man. I enjoyed.

  • Mylissa On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    You are such an astounding writer. I am in awe of your talent, your passion, your voice. You are beauty dripping from a pen.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, April 19, 2007, carlosjackal (3016)By person wrote:

    Like an arrow straight through the heart...To love again without pain or fear of loss...fantastic stuff!

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    This was stunning in it's simplicity.

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    And it's a fave for me.

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