Ray

By DiscordiaDarling

I'm sorry...

Sorry that I'd rather open my mouth-
than bite my tongue for your paraplegic ego trip.

I can't cater to your little fantasy,
and I wish that just once.
You would look into my eyes while I read-
these stanzas developed on your pity party.
As opposed to looking down my shirt,
for meaning in my words.

God knows,
this never was what it was supposed to be.
You're wasting your breath,
trying to convince me otherwise.

Go about popping your pills.
Singing random rap lyrics,
because it makes you feel more like a man.

Tear through those hymens,
like they're going out of style..
and keeping talking shit,
because I wouldn't give you the time of day.

Just remember baby,
you said I was a train wreck waiting to happen..
and tonight.
I'm crashing into your terminal.

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© 2007 DiscordiaDarling
Published on Monday, May 14, 2007.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • nur hidayah On Tuesday, May 15, 2007, nur hidayah (116)By person wrote:

    I was waiting for you eagerly and here you are to slap then carress with such electrifying conviction. Hmm... "tear through those hymens" w-wonderful, yes.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Monday, May 14, 2007, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    this was filled with that female anger that is both poignant and sexy. the last stanza made me feel like i should grab you before you kick my balls and attempt to kiss you. -l-

  • Moonflower On Monday, May 14, 2007, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    the ending got me, nice.

  • A former member wrote: Fucking shit. "Tear through those hymens, like they're going out of style.." That killed me. This had such conviction, and that ending. Wow. Amazing, pookiekins. You definitely stomped on that writer's block. ♥.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, May 14, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Charles .. Good write. .. *loves the word Ray* terminal is a nasty word

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