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Comments by Guillotine

"This was just plain, straightout beautiful and touching and mindblowing all at the one time. We all wear these flowers, but some never find their places and neither do we."
Posted by Guillotine on "To Choke On Glitter With Perfect Eyes.." by BeautifulCalamity

"An interesting walk through your mind, John. The life of a wanderer is always dogged by such memories; Hopefully you find some peace."
Posted by Guillotine on "The Old Chair" by johntaiyu

"One of my favourites from you, Baz. A lot of brilliant constructions and skilled manipulation, threaded through with imagination and passion."
Posted by Guillotine on ".empty.bottle.amarone.nights." by verablue

"God, this rips my heart out. I don't have words to express what I want to say other than that, I love you and I need you to stay safe. I trust in you,"
Posted by Guillotine on "catch 22" by thesuccubusreturns

"Started slow, but by the time I finished reading this I had shivers running over my spine. Glad I read this."
Posted by Guillotine on "more than waiting" by whisperer

""this is a spoken word with a blistered tongue" - great metaphors and expressions all through this piece. So many more great lines in this. Much respect."
Posted by Guillotine on "Blue Methadone Cosmo... An Artist On Stage..." by Bella Butchery

"A lot of poignant and emotional responses well from this work, I can relate well to this. A sinister walk in the last few stanza's; post more and keep me reading."
Posted by Guillotine on "Angels and Devils" by thesuccubusreturns

"Suck beautifully striking imagery - a vivid lesson in true emotive responses. A damn good read and I'm going to read it again. Good work."
Posted by Guillotine on "Lupercal" by purr_verse

"This was painful to read - this form of abuse leaves the deepest scars and the little part of Stockholm in all of us reacts. Amazing and I can't wait to read more."
Posted by Guillotine on "Tender Abuse" by thesuccubusreturns

"Also - as a side note, allcaps titles are hard to read. Unless it's an anger poem or something of the like I suggest you reevaluate the use of such, especially when this poem is meant to be melancholy."
Posted by Guillotine on "Shimmering Sliver" by brokenbandagedbetter

"A few good images here, but a lot of this was staggered and hard to establish a rythym with this. If you were attempting to create a dystrophy it may be worth expanding your vocabulary."
Posted by Guillotine on "Shimmering Sliver" by brokenbandagedbetter

"A few great descriptions here. I liked it. "
Posted by Guillotine on "Inhale. Hold. Hold. Hold. Exhale." by lstdarkness

""another fallen angel on the wings of a tear drop" were the lines which most left an impact on me, a stunning write in the superb."
Posted by Guillotine on "when oblivion fucks a whisper (go back to sleep)" by whisperer

"Damn but your writing amazes me. Filled with want and desire, yet melancholic and hollow. I like this a lot."
Posted by Guillotine on "The Fall of the Unfiltered Camel Blues" by Doc

"Stalker can do whatever he pleases. Arguments have no place here, he was merely pointing out the stupidity of your actions. That goes for both of you."
Posted by Guillotine on "who the fuck gives a shit what its call bitch it don't need a..." by Frater Synth

"If you "don't give a shit" about your spelling and people criticism, then maybe this is not the site for you. None of us are here for ego pats. Maybe you should try MySpace."
Posted by Guillotine on "who the fuck gives a shit what its call bitch it don't need a..." by Frater Synth

"If your going to be as abusive and aggravating towards our community I cannot see your place here or your fitting in."
Posted by Guillotine on "who the fuck gives a shit what its call bitch it don't need a..." by Frater Synth

"I think you should both just get over yourselves. SD, next time you consider mouthing off to a community and brashly telling us you 'don't give a fuck', please reconsider."
Posted by Guillotine on "who the fuck gives a shit what its call bitch it don't need a..." by Frater Synth

"Welcome to DarkPoetry. As Hatter said, possibly not your strongest poem to date. Either way, I'll have too keep up with newer ones and it will be a pleasure to watch you improve."
Posted by Guillotine on "The Girl In The Peasant Dress" by DowngradeBeauty

"I think that line was long ago broken. Thought provoking."
Posted by Guillotine on "Naked Self Portrait Of The Blind Man" by manywalks

"*yawns* Was there a point to this? Did it have any purpose? I smell troll. And this one hasn't been showering for a long, long time. Y'know what? *rawr* Fuck off."
Posted by Guillotine on "Ha! I am a moron!!" by Ghost One

"This was fucking unbelievable, stealing the words right out of my mouth mere moments before I was to attempt a similar piece to this. You've summed it up brilliantly though, and I'll leave it at that."
Posted by Guillotine on "I Recall a Good Night's Sleep." by Drifter

"The title is figurative? This isn't a real haiku. If you take that out, this would work fine."
Posted by Guillotine on "Rope (well sorta) unfinished?" by knowhereman

"Fucking hell, I can see why you couldn't write anymore of this. Much respect for writing what you did. Much appreciated. ~Song"
Posted by Guillotine on "deaf" by edenscancer

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